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Mrs. Kennedy 2007-05-06 . chapter 1
Oh Yevon this was soo funny. I really can imagine their Honeymoon end up like this, even though I love this pairing xDD.
I think Wakka would probably act like this, letting Lu do all the stuff and all, totally clueless that's the Wakka we love.
Even if he acted stupid it was still kind of cute ^-^

I totally loved the line "For the fifth time that hour did I ask myself why I asked her to marry me in the first place."

The way Wakka thinks about his now wife is just to hilarous.
I think it was a good Idea of writing it trough Wakka's view so it gets more funny. You made Wakka really sound like Wakka he was not OOC.

The next thing that happened threw me off the loop. Lulu blushed.

"It was the most beautiful thing, like seeing the sunset for the first time after a cold winter storm. See? Now I’m doin’ poetry! I really am deeply, truly, madly in love!"

Aw so cute but still funny xDD
The end with Keepa and all damn that was great xD, it's been a while since I laughed so much about a fic that was on the other hand soo sweet

Wow I talked to much, but thats because I love this Story it's so great and funny. Keep up that great work

And oh poor Wakka^^

~LukkaLover
Mistress of Earth 2007-05-02 . chapter 1
great job! i loved it!
Kurissyma san Tybalt 2007-04-11 . chapter 1
Too funny! I loved it! I doubt I shall ever be able to stop laughing now.
Lukka + Paralai 4 ever!
Xx-Bex-xX
Laguna's twin sister 2006-11-11 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA

that made a lot of sense

Keep the babies coming ya?

HAHAHHAHA
Jacceh 2006-11-03 . chapter 1
Hahaha that was damn funny! I loved it!! =D
Anbu Shinigami Alchemist 2006-07-23 . chapter 1
I normally don't like or review M-rated stories, but this was funny! ^_^ Even if it was lemon-ishy, but not fully.
Samantha 2005-10-08 . chapter 1
I love this fic it's amazing!! You must write more please I'm begging you! I've been waiting for the next chapter for about a year! I really want to read it! Please write more!
Muddy Brown Eyes 2005-08-01 . chapter 1
That is one of the funniest LuluxWakka stories ever. I'd love to see what you could write for Lulu when she's giving birth. One word for Wakka: Beware!
Rikku'sBrunetteDouble 2005-04-19 . chapter 1
this is sweet, romantic, and hilarious. i never knew lulu was capable of that. wow.
RayTheThief 2005-03-26 . chapter 1
yay that was excellent and funny. you dont find many good luluXwakka's out there.
gohan11 2005-03-12 . chapter 1
i thought he made sure the door was locked tho how did he not catch that it was unlocked
tonkeli 2004-09-21 . chapter 1
this story is rather funny. i hope that you will write something more.
Turkoholic 2004-09-17 . chapter 1
he he - poor Wakka! i didn't give their honeymoon a second thought, but thats how it should be, Lu being all dominant, it made me laugh!
Lt.Wyoming 2004-09-13 . chapter 1
Nicely done where do you writers come up with this stuff. I give it my A.O.K. seal of approval!
angkat14 2004-08-18 . chapter 1
ahaha...some honeymoon you got there...it was funny...poor poor wakka...

one more thing, sugar, raise the ratings on this one...this should be rated R...believe me, better to be careful than get the fic deleted...i've been there...
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