I really liked this a lot and I think that the added chapter was a good choice, and I also like your style of writing.

Would be perfection except for the few typos.

A great read if I say so myself!

Wonderful, just wonderful. _ This is going on my favorites for sure.

mitora.

i take that i havent reviewd this chapter to send you an important message

GO ON WRITTING! AT least a sequel!

ive been going nutty why i had not heard of this story in so long(i had forgotten to log into my profile :S not smart)please go on (puppy eyes beggin)

NICE STORY. i think you're right, that spike would be a cool guy if he wasn't so tied to the past. i haven't seen the movie, so thanks for the little info thingy at the bottom of the first chapter. it totally helped make sense. a lot. - good job with this story, i like it...

great faye/spike fic... no sloppy forced confessions of love... no screw julia type writing... very bebop

Excellent job. I like how you ended it, and how smoothly and realisticly the emotions were portrayed. I love Spike/Faye fics. Sigh...

All right, no longer criminal or unlawful or anything bad...I'm so very, very, very happy you continued it. Even though they were two separate chapters, the flow of the mood was uninterrupted, and it was so nice to see depression written in a way that didn't drag you down. I don't think Spike was OOC at all; it was like you said, he's free from his past. It's refreshing to see a more realistic (christ, why do I say that about fan*fiction*?) take on Spike, in the way that he's a man who takes it all in stride. Any ways, I'm getting too wordy, so I'll just say very well done and thanks for adding.

Adelaide E

you are the sweetest thing :)

i love your story... liked the second chapter more than the first

but i just love it :)

oh that was cute...u didnt have either of them get out of character once...vewy vewy good

:-D

Hari

wow... that was amazing. u r such an great writer... im blown away at how good that was!

That was lovely!

all i got for you is a three letter word... wow. it blew my mind away, and thats saying sometihng P good work and keep it up! have fun writting )

How could you stop there? Aw man! Please, update ASAP! I really want to see what happens next, this story was very interesting from the start.

interesting story :)

One shot? ONE SHOT! Well, I guess just cling to that naive hope that, with enough reviews, you'll see how criminally wrong it is to leave it like that. But, whether you continue or not, it's still one wonderful piece of work. Very well written, the mood exceptionally depressing and then painfully hopeful...well, loved it, and thanks for writing it.

Adelaide