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Lord this was awesome. Like a wonderful telling of a drama at the theater. It was interesting how you played ou their emotions and how you ended it. Not expected, and that's a good thing.

Y'know, I grew up collecting Legion of Super Heroes and fell in love with Brin Londo right from the start. Especially in the late 80s. The poor boy’s been through a lot over the decades and now with the resurgence of the series thanks to the Legion cartoon, Timber Wolf is appealing to a whole new generation. Your story was very adult, far more than the *old* comics ever depicted and it was a refreshing read. Teenagers and tweens all living together under one roof and no one ever seemed to be getting lucky. Uh huh. I always thought there was something missing with that whole Saturn Girl-Brin Londo asteroid thing, too... Eh, ancient history. Anyway, thanks for a great read!

Wow, nice take on my fav'rit legionaire. And well constructed story too. perfect 10!

great story

I really liked this story. I think you got their personalities exactly right.

Good. *Damned good*. You write whenever you want to...I'll certainly be first in line to read it.