Okay, this is a very strange but interesting plot...but u gotta add meat onto it! You have the basic skeleton of the story but u need descriptions, thoughts, history/backgrounds, relationships, atittudes, etc.

Oh this is a very good idea that you have here! I thank you for reviewing my story. Did you read any of the others I wrote? At any rate, I hope you write more of this!

Love it, like it, Come on with the new chapters..

And, um, sweetie.. check your summary. It's accidently, not exedentely. (zokay, it took me a while to get that one right too :p)

Love Rose

wow u have a great stroy. can't wait 2 c what happens next

O cool! I wanna know what happens! Please update

This seems pretty good so far...update soon

i love it.

Way to go Ros@,

Like the story, no spelling mistakes (:-p I'beta-ed, lol, hihi) Anyways (milkyways) come on with the next chapter.

Love And Paperclips

Rose

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great story! update soon!

I like it, I just wish it were longer