that was deep. I'm surprised that you don't have that much reviews... this fic is very good. well written and nice plot. yeah.. sad but nice at the time. keep the good work.
guess there are many people taht doesn't appreciates real good stories.

Aw ...

Write more SVU fics, PLEASE!

Em x

This definitely read better than 'Jealousy'. There were a few typos as well also a few tense problems. But all in all this was pretty good. I'd like to see this developed into not just a narrative but a story with action, if you're going to continue.

Well, this story is better than 'Jealousy'. It doesn't read quite as dryly as the other. There were too many 'but' and 'however' phrases popping up. It gets repetitive. There were a few tense mix ups you had, but it was okay. Nothing spectacular, but nothing horrible either.

Also: Elliot wouldn't have wanted to be her teddy bear. Pillow? Blanket? Matress? Maybe. But I doubt he thinks she has a teddy bear.

OMG i love this one too! Great job... although some bits don't 'flow' like it skips to a different tense/pov
But its good i love it
KEEP GOING!

Loved "Jealousy", and I love this one 2. Great job.