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Reviews for: The Invisible Line
JennCorinthos 10/18/05 . chapter 1
I'll hand over a eraser to Josh if it will get them together already... Great short...

JENNIFER
Jessica 12/14/04 . chapter 1
nice! I like it! I don't know if you're continuing it, but if you are I would definetly read it.
Token 8/29/04 . chapter 1
I agree, very good in keeping with cannon. I hope there's more too - I'd love to know what Donna's opinion of the 'line' is!
Phaser Lady 8/23/04 . chapter 1
O! Very nice. I'm intruigued. I don't suppose you'd be kind enough to give us more? Love the ideas running through Josh's head, the whole theme of the imaginary line.
hyacinthian 8/22/04 . chapter 1
Great story. Canon was right on-target.
kursk 8/17/04 . chapter 1
Good story, I hope that they finally be happy
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