Beautiful story! I hope you will add more to this soon. This is a sad and touching work.

Beautiful *snif*! You should write another chapter.

I thought this story was very heart touching and it should really be made into a real episode and it was also very interesting. I enjoyed it thourghouly and was full of anticipation and joy, and sadness as I read this wonderful fan-fic.

Wow, cool story!

THIS WAY TOTALLY GREAT! ( as i already said) but ummm by-the-way only WARLOCKS can blink therefore Prue wouldn't be able to! geez the nerve learn your stuff! no no only kindding. It was really great

this story TOTALLY rules! GREAT work

awesome story, i really liked it. keep it up!

WOW! All i can say is...WOW! :)

This is so good.

I loved this! I read it twice, and it is really good. You are great at creating the emotions. And it wasn't too incredibly long, and you finished it off wonderfully! Great job.

Hey this is great!

damn good story! damn good! i give it a 10!

Well, I was going to mention that Leo seemed rather out of character, dating the way he did, especially considering he's a whitelighter and not really around, but the reason for it was explained at the end. Nice job. Is that it or is there going to be more?

Ahh! How could that happen? I'm enjoying the story so far. My only criticism has nothing to do with the actual text rather than the formating. It's much easier to read something online when there are spaces between the paragraphs. Use the tags.

Wow. That's sooo sad!