Please continue!

please finish fast

are remus dead? i don't understand

this story is realy interesting and novel. voldemort love alex as his son and vice versa : this idea is cool but i want to see the potter's reactions when they learned the truth.

Aww! A cliffhanger! I see that you have stop updating about 2 year ago. This story is wonderful, and I sincerely hope that you would come back and finished it. It would truly be a waste if you abandon it now. So update soon please.

it's been quite a while since you've updated this fic - i know it's on hiatus, but i do hope you plan to continue the story. i think the characterizations and conflicts are well done despite what you said about it being poorly written. i am especially interested to see what happens between alex & moony.

Hmm... I finished reading what is included so far in your story yesterday. Speaking of which, I apologize if my previous review offends you or seems self-contradictory. Insomnia has been getting to my mind. You are, of course, entitled to do as you wish with your story and improvement is always appreciated.

I'm curious:
Do you regret the direction that the story has taken on in the last two chapters? It is really quite different from the more light-hearted chapters before.

Hm, interesting story. VERY interesting story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I think it is a great plot and I love the whole spliting of the soul, but please, PLEASE don't make Harry turn on Voldy. Too many fanfics have harry dark and then turn on old Snake Eyes. It would be nice ofr once for him to be a loyal son, to follow Voldy willingly, instead of being manipulated. Oh well, ur call. Great story though!

Put on hiatus because this is "poorly written"? If you think that, you need to be reminded of a few things. Your story has been translated into two other languages. One guy even translated all the chapters. Perhaps the translators are your friends but that does not account for the fact that they spent such effort, if your story is indeed that horrid. Most of your Harry Potter fics have over a hundred reviews, Darkly Treacherous has thousands, and only two have less than a hundred. You are a good writer and come up with great ideas. That is if I may say so based on what I've seen from this story. Yes, I realize that the ff net community is attracted to a certain type of fanfiction and decide to love all sorts of stories, even if they sometimes include less-than-skillfully-written details. I, myself, often favorite stories that have irksome qualities. However, so far, your story seems to be on the positive side. Banal details or scenarios are not dragged out: There is a good balance of action, and verbal entertainment. That quality is quite rare. You also do not over-dramaticize or seek to include excessive amounts of 'interesting things,' which cause many others to ruin their stories (that includes famous authors). Perhaps you find your story to be not unique enough--and that is absolutely up to you to decide--and I respect your wish to take a break from writing HP fanfics for a while but please do not look down upon your stories in such a way.

On a side note, please do continue this story soon. Many would be overjoyed.

i really do hpe u keep writing for some weird reason i really like this story. but i also hope you make james and lily pay, and badly.

i love your story so much! i couldn't stop reading till the end but you left at such a good place plz update soon i cant wait to see the reactions and the outcome!!

when are you going to update?

the truth, do not speak English, and the only reason of this post is to ask, or rather beg you to stay with the fic, and while not speak English will follow, either by translation or learning to understand English

must follow
please

This is an inctricate fiction with a spiral of dark emotions completely deep. Continue writing and updating...
~maddiebooks

PLease update its been 3 years./