awww! this was so cute! i loved it!

Lol nice job

Nice one-shot tale. :D

I must say that it was clever way for a person to fall in love and gain the girl in the end. :D

Please do keep up the good work upon such great tales like this one in case of future stories. :D

I have read this many times and just realised that I had never reviewed. Great one shot. Very nicely written.

this was really adorable :3 i enjoyed reading it

Dude this story is great. Love how she became impatient when he said to wait six days.

i think i just got diabetes... and i'm not sad. damn, that's not a good sign for me. for you, top honors. well done! lovely tongue in cheek fic.

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i still can't get over it. the smile- it won't leave.

AWESOME!

Hi, this is Bob speaking. Hero would like to leave a review, I'm sure, but she is currently having some kind of..well I don't know what it is reall. She's running around giggling, not answering when youcall for her and making little-happy-fuzzy-animal-sounds. Would you please tell us what you did to her so we can try to find an antidote?

hopefully,

Bob

hey lets just change our deal go back ten years and wait six day you know what fuck the six day and lets do it now

that was so cute!

That was so good! You kept them in Character! Nice!

I totally wish this would happen.

I've reviewed this before. I'm doin' it again. *grin*

Awesome!

That was so cute! Cute? What am I saying... It was adorable! Cute without being sappy is rare, nowadays. You did great with that one! Thank you!