Incrediable sweet! I loved it!

Wow, keep it going. This keeps getting better and better.

NEXT! :)

As I said to Maxy... Awww...ness. That was adorable. I totally loved it. You put Rachel in a good character, if that makes ANY sense. I mean the intro, with her talking about being sick and all, was perfect. Then the elbowing? Great. This was awesome, I love it. *tosses chocolate kisses into the air* Keep writing. Aisy

Awwww...Jen, that was just so darn cute! I loved it! I can't wait for your other stuff to come out! Keep it up! Catch ya later! Luv ya all! (Anyone notice how I always say that?)

-Maxy Steel

Sniff... aw, this is sweet... :) Glad you got the next bit done... :)

Ellen

Okay is this enough reviews yet? :) :) :)

Awww...how sweet! That was just soo cute! YOu write really well, Jen. Keep it up! Catch ya later! Luv ya all!

-Maxy Steel

*blinks and reads this again* You amasing little nit wit! I had this EXACT, I repeat, EXACT dream last night. I was feeling yucky around midnight, so I sat in bed and closed my eyes, and put myself in Rachel's head. I do this often you see. The point is, when I fell asleep, I dreamt that Rachel had caught a Dread virus, one that involved her to have a fever and go into spastic shocks and Max was there watching her... JUST LIKE THIS! This is very weird. Maybe those Gaelic people were right. It's not weird, it's fate. Thanks for putting my dreams on paper, this is beyond amasing. *huggles and throws coffee beans abound*

Yes, you got my vote of MORE PLEASE!

Oh My God! That was sooo sweet. I loved it. You have to write a sequel!

Well, count this as ONE review, anyway... I wanna see more! :)

Ellen