YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IN SIX YEARS! Please update I really like this story!

sad there isn't more!

This story was great. Why stop.

i like this muchly. lily seems a bit mary-sueish but i don't give a dang, i will keep reading this.

if u haven't already, check out my Troy fanfic. It's called

"An Affair of Love and War".

please update this! I like it a lot.

Your story is great!

carry on with the good work :)

I think it was a very nice chapter lol! A little of a lot like the original story but hey it's keeping it the same as the history puts it... only a different in the woman. Just a small idea so people don't think you've created a Marry Sue, mabye you want her to be I don't know lol but it's more injoyable for the main characters to have faults. Like make her clumsy (the most popular) or make her rebellious, or make her not as beautiful as her friends claim you know? Make her mediocer (I probably spelt that wrong lol) but an idea would be like their is a girl who is extremely beautiful possibly more beautiful then Helen of Sparta... and let Paris meet Lily and find out behind that sad, and rough enterior (prolly spelt that wrong too) that there is something amazingly beautiful that he doesn't want the other girl or something... u know? Just thought it would be a cute idea, change the course of fate slowly but surely!

Yes I think it was rather enjoyable for being short! Sounds kind of the same as Helen's story though ;)but I think it was VERY well put ect.

Good Job!

well, i don't know how she'll feel about paris-that's completely up to you. but, i do have an idea as to why menelaus would hate lily. in those times, and even through the middles ages and such, a boy was desired over a girl in birth since a boy can marry without a dowry to be provided, unlike a girl. basically, girl's were considered to be more expensive and, therefore, not desired. hope to see more! UPDATE SOON!

YAY! SO GOOD! But you stopped! O.o . :( I wanted to read more! lol. Well, maybe you'll update again anyway someday soon? Heh. Hopless reader dreams. :D Great story! -Dunthonwen

OH! SO GOOD! And there is only 2 chapters and you haven't updated in so long! O.o! *continues reading anyway* -Dunny

There's no doubting that this is a Sue fiction. Lily and Chloe are not names belonging to the time period, and that Lily seems to be a common Sue name.

Good luck

Yes, I agree with fanfiction's saviour {he truly is a saviour. This is just a bunch of crap. I too am a Paris fan {but I love Odysseus more, but would I write a Mary Sue story like this? Nope. Just wondering to anyone who knows, would Chloe be a name they had back in those days? Sounds too modern if you ask me. Same with lily. I don't even think they have heard of the flowers { considering they don't grow their and they didn't have information books as we do now.} I label this a Mary Sue. Good day to you.

Hey Rz42492 here. Saw Troy. Brad and oralndo r ssoo cut. like the begining UPDATE SOON

Oo..I wonder what is in Lily's fate...What will she think about Paris? A good story, I wish you would continue. Will Paris take Lily home with him- and will that start the war?

-Modesty

Sounds promising...I want to read more!

-Modesty