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EsScaper 6/4/06 . chapter 27
I haven't reviewed your story in a long time. It was nice to get back to it. I do like it, esp the whole Muriel/Sirius relationship. It is very nice to get back to your bit of the HP universe and visit your characters again.

Of course I'd have to say if Mr. Moony gets his act together and goes back upstairs that Venus definitely won this one...with a little help from Sirius, of course. Sometimes people need a bit of a push to see what is right in front of them.

Esc.
littlexbunnyxfooxfoo 3/20/06 . chapter 4
I was just wondering,

Is Riddel the same as Riddle? Are you making a typo because i am a little confused.

I know i'm behind, i just found this story through a friend and i think it's great! Keep up the good work!
sirius-lover24 3/20/06 . chapter 25
oh man this story is soo awesome, i was so upset when avery killed lucius. please continue the story soon.
sirius-lover24 3/18/06 . chapter 7
venus wins in all battles in this story
sirius-lover24 3/17/06 . chapter 5
venus totally wins. lol
Straycat1 6/23/05 . chapter 24
I just noticed something, after rereading this chapter for Probably the hunderd time. THe line that says 'The official aurors from the ministry arrived next' has an error. Cause you said Kingsley died in 11 STO, but now he is at the wedding. At least I think it was Kinglsey . Love this chapter and the last two, It did took a long time for them to finally get together again. :)
Kari M. Black 6/11/05 . chapter 24
venus wins
Kari M. Black 6/11/05 . chapter 20
Venus Wins
Kari M. Black 6/10/05 . chapter 5
Venus Wins.
Weatherwax 5/1/05 . chapter 25
Now that was dramatic, very good. I don't know if you want people to vote on this chapter but it seems clear that Snape has been a slave to love most, if not all of his life.

Is this the end of this fic?
Weatherwax 4/30/05 . chapter 24
Venus seems to have won, but Sirius seems happy so perhaps he's also won.

Great chapter.
Weatherwax 4/29/05 . chapter 23
A great chapter, sensual in places without going overboard.
Weatherwax 4/24/05 . chapter 22
Now that was a sexy chapter, well done. I'm very impressed with Snape's positive reaction, it shows he can care about others.
Weatherwax 4/17/05 . chapter 20
A very good chapter, I think Venus wins this round but I don't think Remus is going to mind.
Weatherwax 4/10/05 . chapter 19
That was a great chapter, well done.
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