you know...characters going made really isn't my cup of tea but...i actually quite liked this one shot.

The mood...descriptions...the format...somehow, i think this story had a ring to it.

good job!

Wow. That was extremely disturbing and depressing... but good. It was well written, despite some typos here and there.

Beautiful.

drew me to tears i loved it so much third time reading this. I congratulate you.

This is great. Please write more. Happy Vday!

good one

wow this one was kind of creepy but i like that malfoy didnt automatically give in to his desire. he maintained his regular personality which i like

Wow again! This was so intense wuth so much angst (yay!) You seem to favour D/Hr... Anways, this is lush and very true in my eyes. It also holds the right emotions when Hermione's 'raped'... Anyhow, cool story! Star x

This is a great story. You have a lot of character development, and the ending is very fitting. I like how you portrayed Draco's insanity; it really added to the conclusion. Beautifully done.

i love the madness. the length is perfect.

WOW! That was just bloody awesome! I absolutely awesome! It brought me to tears at the end.

i loved this, it was so good i loved it its so sad but so good. i congradulate you.

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Oh my gosh..it's great! I really like it!

wow. amazing. you did really good following the guidelines of the contest. i must admit i'm more of the draco-and-hermione-live-happily-ever-after sort, but this was really amazing. great job!

OMG that was freaking GOOD. dang i had chills going down my spine...imagining draco saying hermione's voice calls to him in the wind. that's really sad...i felt so bad for him. they put him in a mental hospital?! i'd expect him to kill himself already. wow good writing nonetheless i loved it. =]