 spiralgal 2009-11-01 . chapter 7I really love this story, but I'm so sad that you haven't updated it!! It's been almost 2 years!! Surely you could have done something, even just putting up a note!!
If you ever continued this, I would be thrilled. Despite them being OC, I love Demitrius & Lilith, and what you've done with Hogwarts. Really wish that you would get around to continuing with this. Ja ne. |
 CandyCane 2008-03-26 . chapter 7 Wow, an update! IT was worth the wait - enjoyed the Founders role in this. Good luck with the finals and update soon? Ta! |
 The8thSin 2008-03-15 . chapter 7*stares wide-eyed at computer screen*D: i absolutely HATE getting to the latest update of a newly-found fic.they always seem to be cliffhangers,and to exceptionally good stories as well.ah,another fic to add to my huge alert list,oh well,can't say i'm complaining :) this is a great story,plot wise and how it's organized and written.and congratulations for originality,you've given a new twist to Harry Potter Time-travel stories. |
 Hail030685 2008-03-01 . chapter 7Hello~~!!
That was a marvellous story you have pull out of your head!
I'm glad that I have the time to read your story as it really catches my attention. Do update your story as soon as possible...please...
Thank You! |
 Lady Heather68 2008-02-05 . chapter 7This is a really interesting story. As you know children from the future has been done before, but you made yours quite orinal to any that i have read before. I am looking forward to your udates. |
 Hannah42992 2008-01-26 . chapter 7Love the story so far...great job...what will happen to the twins next?...please continue with it...=) |
 zafaran 2007-12-29 . chapter 7Very nicely done story so far. I'm eagerly looking forward to the continuing adventures of Demi and Lillith. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm |
 Snarky B. 2007-12-27 . chapter 5 If you had ever bothered to read the books, then you would know that that the Hogwart's school year begins on Sept. first--always. Why are your characters in class during their summer break? |
 Misplaced Angel 2006-10-21 . chapter 6fabulous, update soon |
 animeangel088 2006-06-26 . chapter 6good fic. |
 Elsa 2006-05-17 . chapter 6 This is a very unique story. I really hope you will finish it. Please, Oh-Mighty-Writer, update soon! |
 moonlight guardian 2006-04-18 . chapter 6really awesome story,plz update soon |
 Elizabeth Patil 2006-03-19 . chapter 6THis is a great story that needs to be continued!! |
 insanechildfanfic 2006-02-11 . chapter 6this is great |
 twisteddagger 2005-08-29 . chapter 6I love the story! It was hard to get into at first, but after the first couple of chapters I loved it! |