I am proud of you! For it takes a lot of courage to kill your own character in a story. Especially a character this dear to you.

And to make it fit into a good story, without becoming sappy or pathetic shows real talent when it comes to writing. I really like this story, even though it has a sad ending.

Ooh! I'd be scared out of my wits if I had just seen Death and talked to her too!

You definitely got some excitement going in this chapter. I sure do hope you're not planning on KILLING off Artimis? I love her! You can't do that! lol .. Even if it's not till the end of the story, you just can't! Please? :) lol

Just don't take as long to get the next chapter going ok? :)

dood! this story ruls! update soon!

cat

First, the good stuff:

This is a great beginning to a wonderful story! I look forward to reading more of it, whenever my computer is cooperating, that is. LOL! I know you said it wasn't a sequel to Misfits or Seven years later, but it definitely has some elements that make it easier to understand if one has read those before this one. I had some good laughs at Sev's and Arty's expense (haha, I know she doesn't like being called that! lol) All I see here is a fantastic story from that incredible imagination of yours that never ceases to amaze me. Nothing MS about it at all. :)

Now, the other part... there are a LOT of misspelled words, but only a few grammatical mistakes. Most would be easy to fix. And it would make reading for other folks much easier! :) Just wanted you to know. :)

CAT: heheheh...must-not-cuddle-*glomps Sev and cuddles*

SEV: *sizzle* why me?

JIM: Snooze, you lose.

CAT: Great story, update soon!

cat

Typical Mary Sue garbage.Sorry but I've read better