Fantastic!

Good job!

Oh... Ah...

Cool!

This was great!

Golbez: THAT IS A GREAT ENDING don't you think so sam?
Sam: yeh whatever
Golbez: oh right you didn't read it ohohoho

Gee. It was such a nice sory. So happy, so fluffy. Great story! I'm sure to read your other stories.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

^^hehhe that is so kawaii^^

Great! Funny too!

Shade and Maria kinda remind me of Cyclone and Typhoon. I don't care much about Narisha being in your stories or not but i care about you updating and bringing great stuff like that to the readers. Continue... and have a nice day.

I liked it! I also like Narisha! I know what you mean by having your own characters! Me and Sil own enough to have our own show! (We are even going to start writing a plot line and stuff. We may actually have one when we get older!)
This is Celestial the Hedgird signing off! ^_~

lol that's kool!^^ I made another ShadAmy called "Rabbits" It also fluffy^^ I like fluff! Check it out. ^^

Sweet! Heh heh heh... Narisha is a human! Narisha is a human!

*gets glares*

Uh... a pretty one?

Ruby: Ignore her. She's hopeless... XP

KtF: But you like the review! Very good! I like the twist! Please right more! I must run so Narisha doesn't kill me!

*flees*

Tails really can screw it up sometimes. Continue... please continue, pretty please even!

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

I don't think that you've broken any rules here. The chapter is written quite well but you should put your comments in parentheses.