I love the way the Orcs are numbered!

thats so sad! lol. no haldir dont die! *cries* lol. well i havent read the other ways, *hint hint* so i cant say which is my favourite. of course he wouldnt have died anyways, right RIGHT! lol. funny though, karma for the cute idea.

Clever!

Poor Haldir. Not only does he loose conversation and canon in the movie, he DIES. And we feel that we still have to torture him.

more, please!

I like the concept, but for some reason I thought some of this was somewhat humorous, but looking at the genre you chose it's not supposed to be.

It would probably look more serious if you cut those nubers down a little and if you described the feelings a little more. If it's intended to be humor/angst: leave it as it is, it's perfect then. And so far it's appriciated as such...