Good story, thanks for writing!

I've read this something like ten times already, and not on purpose, I just seem to find it again somehow. And every time I read it I want more.

I love it as a oneshot piece, really. And if it just there, somewhere, says it's actually a oneshot I would be satisfied. And if you take a look closer, it's not even in the complete ones category! But it's not. Or that's the impression it gives.

Listen, I know this it's pretty old, you probably forgot that you've writted this, but please, please, if this was planned to be more than a simgle chapter fic, then, please, continue soon.

I'm a hopeful one, don't you think?

Because the probabilities that all of this has been just a mistake and it was a oneshot in first place are pretty high.

If that's so, I'm making the ridiculous xD

Anyway, as I said, I'm hopeful

One of the best things I've ever read.

It -hurt-.

Jesus. Well done.

This is really really good angst. Nicely done.

woah. wow. coolsa.

Hn.. it's really sad, and seems ooc... but the scary thing is I can imagine this happening with Ed!

Very good!

poor Ed

Wow... Oh wow.

This is angst at its very best... Absolutely wonderful and breathtaking, made even more interesting by the fact that portions of it were in third person, present tense.

This is utterly amazing... I can't think of high enough praise, really, so you'll just have to believe me when I say that it's amazing. _;

I'm adding this to my favorite stories list... Keep writing!

Well, this is a great story! I'm amazed, Itoo feel like Edward must be mentally kicking himself sometimes! D