 Princess-Perfect 8/18/04 . chapter 1Wow, this is SO good. It was beautifully written, you have a gorgeous writing style. And the plot is very unique and original. I've never read of that side of Dean before. I thought it might be Seamus who was into Dean, but who says Dean can't like her either? The only suggestion have is a little more proofreading, there were a couple of spelling mistakes. Do you know that saying, "quality or quantity"? This is a wonderful examples of it. It may be short (I like short, takes less time to enjoy) but it's great. It was very imaginative and I enjoyed reading it. Great job, keep up the good work! |