Vincent and... I dunno. I think an earlier reviewew got it though - the most likely narrator is Cid. I mean, the rign clues and the language... it just points to it.

Even though I don't go for yaoi and such too much, this was written excellently. Really deep here, and everything just... fit together. Even the analogy with the pickle and s'mores. Also, I've read and finished only like, two first-person present-tense stories in all of FF.Net. Good job on presenting the story this way and actually succeeding. That's pretty hard to do.

Looking forward to more of your stories.

...well its not bad but its not good ethier not trying to put you down or anything but i coudnt finish it.

That was good, good display of character, sometimes I'd think I know who it was you were talking about and then, I wouldnt but Cid and Shera come to mind, but living in Nibelheim? But can it be Shera since he mentioned someone leaving to go to work? I'm so confused...

Uh... Cid and Vince?