please continue!!
cant wait for the next chapter...

Poor Kira, sounds like schizophrenia to me. I hope you continue this story.

Great chapter keep the good work
take care
cindy

Great. I loved the Conner/Trent arguments, and the way you describe how each of them is feeling is very good.

this is fantastic! its really really good! keep adding chapters, and i hope kira will be ok!
miz~g

Wow, great job! This is so cool and interesting. I love the way you describe the voices and stuff, and how the others are reacting. Great characterization of Conner and Trent, their rivalry is neat. UPDATE SOON.

i like it... update soon!

Hey! Awesome story! I love the monster you created and Elsa's plan. So how is the team going to help Kira? Please update soon!

Great start. I can't wait to read more.

Dang! This is a great story! Keep it up - I can't wait to see what happens!

This is a really cool beginning! I can't wait to see more, update soon!