 Yukki-sama 5/13/07 . chapter 3lurve it so far |
 q.thews 2/11/06 . chapter 19I don't know, really don't know what to say
I was quitting this story after the first chapters, it was to hurryed and simple, but i went after that and it become really better, even funny, but now at the end it is back to be to hurried and a little illogical, Hermione surprise has not so much sense.
Wow how an awful review i'm writing here!
I don't like writing bad reviews and the biggest reason it's that i don't write story so i don't exactly know how much hard is to write themm but sometimes i have to.
Bye |
 FreedomGundam 5/11/05 . chapter 19yay that was a great ending |
 eclipsedbrunette 5/3/05 . chapter 20this story really made no sense whatever, you had nothing leading up to d/g or the pregnancy of hermione. |
 cherrysakura5 5/3/05 . chapter 20great couples! lovley story. good good you should feel proud |
 cherrysakura5 5/2/05 . chapter 18i read you whole fanfic its good you just when a little to fast on everything but it good please update |
 believe-in-yourself4ever 4/19/05 . chapter 16Brilliant! Incredibly brilliant! I was laughing so hard I was almost crying. It was so great, I completely loved it. Please oh please, continue on! It was very touching and interesting. I think its cool that you liek added all this humor into it, thats what makes it so great. You are an awesome author, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters! |
 princtongirl828 4/17/05 . chapter 11i think your story is really good but there is one thing that you could really improve on. You really need to put more detail in to your stories.
There is enought detail to understand the basic hapinings but it would help |
 S.F. Card 4/17/05 . chapter 16oh snap ouch noones helping and shes pregnant oh i like this story i really do i espesially like when they fought and then made up cuz i hate cho even though shes pretty i just dont like her with harry im all for my asian sisters but i just cant picture harry and cho |
 christieelise 4/16/05 . chapter 1This chapter was good . Good luck on your future chapters |
 PadfootLover21 12/28/04 . chapter 9no! cliffy! wa! keep the chappy's coming please!
Mrs. Black |
 HPfan58 9/1/04 . chapter 2How cute! I can't wait till the next chapter! |
 Lyric's Angel 8/18/04 . chapter 1Eww! Sorry but the Harry/Hermione pairing is sickening |
 fairambitions 8/18/04 . chapter 1Hey! Your story's awesome, i really like it so far! keep it up, i'm looking forward to the next chapters. It's great, a good read. I'm glad i took the time to read it. I wrote secret letters once, and it turned out the same way.
Mollie |
 HPfan58 8/18/04 . chapter 1Very good story!I'm looking forward to the second chapter! I'll recommend it to everyone! Good job! |