Who said short things always give you less pleasure? ;) Good job mate.

(I also notice the fic is a month away from its 10 year anniversary — sweet)

Do you have a spare butt? I'm only asking because I laughed mine off!

me:it was a jigglypuff...wierd.funny though!haha Ash your afraid of a stupid jigglypuff

Ash:shut up umbreon!*mutters*i hate that stupid thing..

me:i heard that!*uses psycic(as usual)and lifts him into the air*

Ash:not again!

me:tormenting him is fun!you should try it sometime!i liked your story alot!it was funny!bye-bye!

I just hope you know that was the stupidest thing I have ever read heard about or seen

You should have made this one a humor genre! I actually expected the creature to be a very dangerous one, not Jigglypuff! Nice fic! !b

*Cackles* so funny! I never would have expected it to be her, I thought it would be The Evil Eggy-thing.

Hiya! *Waves* Do you happen to be the same Charles from TRHQ2? ANyway, great fic.

Very funny. I liked how you built the tension, plus the comic delivery was spot on. 10/10!

! halarious_! nice twists, nice suspense:P! *snicker*

Heha, cute. Very cute. :)

LOL! XD

BWAHAHAHAH! Actually, I thought it was going to be Togepi...

HAHAHAHA! This is HILARIOUS! LOL!

Oh, that's good, that's rich! I like it! It's funny! Keep doing stuff like this!

Heh. Jigglypuff the unbeatable. I love it... I just love it. BenRG's Rating 8/10

You should of put this in the humor section. But then again, there's so much dirty humor out there it's a doubt if anyone bothers to read anything in case it's dirty humor, so I can understand your reasoning.