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| EveKnight75 2006-01-18 ch 1,  | abusePerfect grasp of Victorian English! The only mistake that I noticed was that you forgot to add a dash after 18 to imply that the year was unclear. For example, it should have been April 15, 18--. The cross-over was relatively smooth, which is rare even in cross-overs between a main show and it's spin-off (Buffy/Angel publications, anyone?) Once again, amazing job. |
| Melanthios 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuse*sniffle* That's so beautiful. |
| Xaviere Jade 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWell written and thought out, a very plausible explanatory account. You've done an excellent job reconciling book and film, except for the end, which seems far too quick. I look forward to more of your work. |
| queerquail 2004-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I must say, this is very complete, I guess you would say. Is Elizabeth supposed to be someone or is she an OC? Will you have another chapter? If so, I can't wait. |
| Lady Norbert 2004-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI'm honored that you chose to have her tell her story to my little OC, and that I was able to read this before it went up. I was being entirely honest when I said it brought me near tears. I'll be linking to it from my website. Thanks, DM! |