Aww, poor Padfoot!
Darn you Prongs for hurting your best friend like that!
And I loved the P.S. at the end!
That's so Padfoot to end such an important thing with something so silly!

hey this is cool its really got style and feeling your way cool i'm going to read all of your storys cuz you are freakin cool

omg i really liked this! I think you shold write like a letter from james that co insides like an answer. I could really rewlate to this story it happened to me too but wow you really can write well!

great!

That was really touching. Its something all best-friends can relate to I think.

I absolutely love what you write. May I aquire the name #1fan? anyway, I also wrote a story, although I seriously doubt it's any better, but I'd like you to tell me what you think. Meanwhile, I'll go re-read your fanfics. amazing. Please don't stop writing.
loads of luv, Dawn.

Aw! THIS IS SWEET!!

fantastic letter - may be you should consider having a letter in 'the Empty Vase'... I really liked it, it was extremely sad. I felt the end was the weakest point though - it seems to me that he spends most of the letter pointing out James' bad behaviour, and then takes it all back at the end, by saying acutally it's not James' problem, it's his own, and that James shouldn't worry about it. I liked the p.s. though - nice bit of bathos!
Fantastic style overall - very well written!

I didn't really read the story, I just wanted to wish you HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

you should do another chappy when james get the leeter

I LOVED IT! It's hard to explain it too, its like its sad, then its like not... then it seems like hes mad... then hes not! but i loved it! lol, you should have James write a letter back!!

This was great! Sounds just like Sirius!

Well, now that I've gotten all emotional, that was a superful story/letter. I like it a lot. Write more stuff and post it soon please!

~Kiliana

hey mel!
i just wanted to tell you, that you kinda of write really good depressing stories...
i think you can describe the feelings of the persons very good...
i like this story a lot, just like empty vase! they're both great!
by the way i hope you'll update soon on empty vase and change of hearts :)
so, i hope there aren't too many mistakes in that review, und if there are, i kinda of don't care, because i can't prevent that ^^
so just enjoy the review! :p
tini

That was really good! I wish you'd post a little extra though and maybe show James' reaction to the letter, or a convo between the two after it.

Good Work