Very good thoughts! I loved it!♥ Masaya is a jerk, Ryou is much better for her. Ryou or Kish. =^.^=

Wow, I love this story! It actually made me want to hear "Everybody's Fool" too... Well, not much to say as far a criticism goes, except that the lyrics to the third verse are wrong. The words are actually "Can't find yourself, lost in your lie," not "lost in your mind?" But aside from the little nitpicky comment, this story is pretty good.

I like it and i'm happy to see another Evanescence fan

It was good the only part that was OOC was Mint. She would never do that to Ichigo, and while I will support a MM paring even if Mint did like him, she wouldn't hurt Ichigo like that.

Other than that it was really good.

When the title said 'song fic' I wasn't to sure what it was so curiosity got the better of me.
And after reading it I had to tell you that I LOVE IT!
I also support Ichigo and Ryou/ Zoey and Elliot, personally i dislike Massaya/Mark a lot, he and Ichigo/Zoey don't make that good of a couple.
Please write another chapter soon

Good!*^_^*

Excellent!

ouch!!damn Masaya this is the 60th time you cheated on her in storys I read.Um...permision to swear at Masaya?Well anyway I'm just going to..uhum...you ** son of a ** you are very disgusting you could have asked Ichigo not use her!Thats twice the pain!!You are very very selfish I wish you would die and rot in the pits of hell.Um...sorry about that Nibzo.Masaya say hi to Hao for me.

Wo ho! Go Ichigo!! I loved it.

LOVE IT!!

well evenascene is my fave group and i like the way you created the story.yeah its pretty cool!!

cool

Good!

i like it! evanescence rulz and so does this songfic!^ ^

It was to short.