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Matiilda
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
This is really clever. Interesting view on Draco/Theodore friendship. I think this is probably how Draco would be like with Theodore - he wouldn't think of himself as better than Theodore. That's interesting. That was a good read anyway!
DracoLovesPansy
2008-05-12 . chapter 1
This made me laugh out loud. And in the end, they're acting so normal. Like, first they're joking together and stuff, then they're like "Well... I should go". Like they didn't enjoy each others company at all. Hm... I just love their kind of friendship, though. Theodore's personality is great; this is always how I picture him to be, and how I picture Draco to be when he's with him. Really good :)
DransyForever
2008-03-13 . chapter 1
haha, that was so cute!
I love your stories!
treana
2005-10-12 . chapter 1
aw, very cute. totally plausible - well, when they were little. aw, all the cuter. ...nott is smart... much more so than draco... makes sense, as the books don't really portray him all that brightly...

^^; ...not much to say as there wasn't much to read, but it's an adorably little ficlet and i like it. ^^
Silver Sailor Ganymede
2005-09-15 . chapter 1
'"Ever noticed the Gryffindors say 'Merlin, no?'"
"Yeah... well, they're not like us, are they?"
"Not at all... muggle-lovers, mudbloods, shamed, wasted wizards..."
"What are you doing, naming off every foul name you ever heard your father say?"'.
That part was really funny. This fic was random, but it was still very good.
Thrills and Frills
2004-12-14 . chapter 1
You got that from JK Rowling's website didn't you? It was very entertaining, though a bit confusing, I couldn't tell who was Malfoy and who was Nott. Either way it was very clever, I loved the thing about Grindelwald and Merlin.
Damashi
2004-09-08 . chapter 1
Firstly, thanks for /your/ review! I try to leave long reviews for stories I like when I have time. ^__^
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Anyways, this was very different from "Darkness" (needless to say), but it too had its own charm. I love how the conversation is ever so innocent, and yet I can already see how the brainwashing-of-the-Pureblood-children has already started to seep into these boys' lives and minds in the most subtle ways.
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It starts out so innocuously, with a discussion I can relate to from way, way back (I never liked salad), and then slips into childish observation of "forbidden" words. "Father doesn't speak foul." Right. And there's the Pureblood pride in the untainted (or at least hiding what's wrong), but where else would Draco have heard those words? It's amusing how the discussion escalates into the creation of insults, and yet sad at the same time, because I know that soon it won't just be in fun. It's a rather bittersweet piece, but I like it all the same.
Finnigan Irish
2004-08-21 . chapter 1
CUTE!
Liebling
2004-08-19 . chapter 1
Queenie-

You're crazy.

Ha ha ha ha.

-Goddess
zuvalupa
2004-08-19 . chapter 1
very interesting!
KitKat001
2004-08-18 . chapter 1
hehehe i thought it was very interesting actually. i quite enjoyed their little conversation... *rubs hands together* theiy're planning somthing... i know it... i espeshally like this part and i dont know why:

"Exactly."

--sigh-- "I wish I'd thought of that."

it just seemed the right thing to say at the time, you know? Well anyways, i must be off... --sigh-- "I wish i wrote this story". Hehehe. bye!
-Kit

p.s. read my fic 'between us'. Fred and George. boo yah! (not as stupid as it sounds) lol. frankly, i dont think it really SOUNDS like anything when all i say is Fred and George, Boo... yah... well anyways. Best be off. Toodaloo!!
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