DAMN IT! It was AWSOME! And ended way to soon! Please let me know if this is finished anywhere. It's so good, well writen and compeling.

This is good. I came across chapter one awhile ago on DA. Glad to find the rest of it. Even though it bites that you killed off the poor kid's parent I like him, I really do. So good job. I shall read the rest.

This is a great work so far it has me dying for more i really can't wait for the next chapter thanks for writing such a good inuyasha story. iwnat to read it so bad i can taste it please post soon thanks for writing these great stories

This is such a good story. It's a shame that it hasn't been updated in so long. Unless you want to update it. Then I would be happy.

Are you EVER planning on updating? I would realy realy like to see the end of this story. *sigh* but if your not gonna update ... i wanna know so I can take it of my fav list. No offence to you. :( Im just trying to update it. I still think your a great writer

This is my favourite chapter. You know it's a really really REALLY good story when it makes you cry. Just the way you describe InuYasha's feelings and the experience it was so heart-felt, moving and...well, sad! But sad is good! Not all stories can be happy! It helps me as a reader to understand more about Keitaro and his "inner voice"! Excellent work, this is your best chapter yet, and I look forward to reading more of this story. This is the best InuYasha FanFic EVER!

Nicely done. I like how you don't have her magically healed right away, and have her just simply human. I like how her personality isn't completely shattered either! We now get to see a more delicate Mariko, though, which is really good to me! I also enjoy once again being in the mind of Keitaro as he's trying to deal with this!

Truly a very heart-stopping chapter. For a minute I thought she was going to die! You've done it again! I really enjoy how Keitaro realizes that someone or something else is talking to him, very amusing yet significant!

This is very well written. I really like how (once again) you have your characters express so much emotion, that we as readers can truly put ourselves in their positions. I like how you contrast younger Shippo with older Shippo too! I also enjoy how you reflect on a past relationship between Shippo and Souten, and when we come back to the modern era we see that the relationship has blossomed. Nice use of dramtic irony at the end too!

You are so talented. Even though it is not the most pleasing chapter, it was very well written. The suspense, the climax, the emotion...I started to feel scared! Congrats and keep up the good work!

I love how you use minor characters in your story, like Souten. You've re-created her very nicely and very believable. I love the last comment that Shippo makes at the end of the chapter, since from what I've read so far, it's so true! That would be awesome if she could sit him though! tee hee

WOW!

Just when you have me convinced that Shippo was no where to be found, he's here! I really like how you use him to bring out Keitaro's jealousy; good character development, as always ^.^! I like the cliffie too!

I like the plot movement here. We finally get to see Keitaro and the others in battle, and I like how Kikyo gets angry. Muwaha. :) Can't wait for all the fun things that are coming!

Really nice twists and turns here! I would never expect that you would have Mariko's family learn about Keitaro's heritage, or have Yukio go to the police! (To be honest, I kind of forgot about him!) But thank you for reminding me!

I really like how create the sense of guilt in Keiko here; I feel as if I can sympathize for her! Once again, congrats on character development! This is definately one of your skills!