cute! love this. love teen titans.

Starfire:HE HE HE HE
Raven:Zip it Star. Okay this is kinda a weird way of reviewing, but me + my m8 want to put our reviews together-
Starfire: So we are fighting continuously over the keyboard-
Raven: -and typing in our niknames and writing in what-
Starfire:-we-
Raven: -want to SAY !
Star: I would not fight for pizza.
Rae: Then why did you punch me in the forehead cos i ate the last slice yesterday.
Star: It was an accident .
Rae; Yeah whatever, **.
Star: you called me a ** ?? FINE ! SEE IF I CARE :-(
Rae: Just if you're wondering, she's gone off into a corner and started to cry. Any way, that story was THE BEST ! Especially the dead body parts ! Oh gawd, just so you know, Star is now throwing stuff round the living room. Damnit you alien freak !!
Star: I AM NOT AN ALIEN FREAK YOU PHSYCHOTIC DEMONIC ** !(Knocks Rae over head with plastic baseball bat which is suprisingly heavy for plastic)
Rae: (Blacks out on floor)
Star: OOPS ! Oh well, i wonder if there's any more pizza in the fridge. Bye !! :-9
Rae: (Groans) mine !! x_x

That was really funny. And I thought it was very well written, and made a lot of sense.
Good job. ^_^

You had Raven in better character than most! Read some of the R stories with her, I did by accident, I usually don't check the rating. Figured it wouldn't reallt matter. Now I am very discriminating on what I read. And what is it with everyone turning Robin and Raven into vampires? I haven't seen anyone else, only those two. And who was the freak who wrote Raven as having Slade for a father? The one with Raven in a coma for twelve years was um...pointless...and I was dizzy from trying to understand the plot...if there was one...
All in all, I loved your fic! Could you write something about the Titans going onto this site and seeing some of the fics? I mean, where does someone come off making Raven and Terra pairs! Or Raven and Starfire...or BB and Robin...or Jinx and Cyborg...or any others I've missed...

For an argument like this, there is no end. As long as there is pizza, one vegetarian, one non-vegetarian, or any teenagers, it will go on. Forever. My sister and I thought about this quite a bit. They fight over what pizza to get, not who gets the last slice. I'm glad you see things like I do, and the end was really funny. In our house, it's usually either first to stuff it in their mouths or forst to blackmail the other into giving it to them. We have issues:)

Lol. Original and hilarious. Typical teenage behavior. Glade I'm not a...WAIT! I AM A TEENAGER!

NO!
-Great fic!

*laughs* ...so the slogans true!

Interesting. Why'd Robin order a pizza, though?

I like the way it ended. The End? Like you didn't know. Lol. Cute story. I liked that.

-TSSC

Here is some constructive criticism (not a flame)
Raven...was out of charactor.
My advice-watch scenes that feature her talking THOUROUGHLY;and when writing her lines sit and think "If I was Raven would I say this?" (she is your fave charactor;so you should give her a bit more effort)

Despite that; you did a pretty decent story.
And your writing skills are not too shabby ^_^

But all you have is discussion and the actions the titans are doing as they speak.

Most importantly-though this is your second story and I am certain your still stretching your legs before hitting the harder to write stories-you need to try writing something that people will want to see.

You need a sole purpose to it besides "what they think on the catchphrase"

My story shown an depth look on Terra's unwilling (untill BB tells her off) betrayal and shows when she turned evil...mainly to shut up the anti terra fans and get the truth across.

Try something along the lines of a plot we would "care" about. Not flaming your idea-but you got to admit it's not that brilliant of an idea.
Do more fics though-I would love to see more

LOLZ! Aw, how CUTE! It was a bit confusing at parts, but otherwise, I was smiling the whole time! ^_^ It's about time someone addressed the slogan, and you did so very creatively! Thoughtful and original...I like it! Five thumbs up! ^_^

Oh man that was funny haha. Very believable, everyone in character hahaha. -walks away laughing-

Ah Class! Very chilla. I thnk maybe Raven was slight OOC but i couldn't really care less. Brilliant!