never has something so bittersweet been so beautiful. drabble that is by far a heart string puller! really great!

For some reason, this was very touching. I think I was holding my breath (heh, good it wasn't too long...)Maybe it's because I personally find it difficult to speak to people, even if I wanted to, and thus don't get to know them...so this story struck a chord

I enjoy this short piece.. very nicely described.

like a love that got away kinda thing... could have been...might have been...

I really liked this drabble a lot. I'm not sure what about it did it, but something in it really struck a chord with me. I really wish I could pinpoint what so I could praise you on it, but I just can't seem to figure it out. Regardless, everything fit together extremely well. Not a single word in it felt forced; it was all very smooth and natural. The tone and mood were perfectly set (wish I could do it so effectively!). And I don't know why, but for some reason I got a kick out of her getting fruits and he vegetables.

Gyah...Kakashi...XD
Nice little drabble haha

Aw! This was so cute for such a short drabble. Well, maybe cute isn't the word for it, but I liked it none the less! Except for the whole ninja thing, I think I've felt that about some random guy I've met ^_^