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YusukiShredder
2008-03-10
ch 16,
abuseAWESOME! You have showed me the coolness of Yukina/Touya pairings! ANF YOU MADE HER KICK BUT! CHYAH! Anyway, I'm eager to fins out what new game their playing... MORE PLEASE AND SON!
Blitzer's demonic spirit
2006-11-18
ch 16,
abusei like it alot..i want a new chapter! its cool...seriously..but i wish it would end when Hiei told Yukina they were sibs..its a great ending ryt? i just hope alot will agree with me
Aperira
2006-10-07
ch 6,
abuseThis is SO funny! I love it! ^_^
LoveableLittleSock
2006-09-19
ch 16,
abuseOhMigod! Man Hunt! I love this game! You see, there are two groups, and it is like hide and seek. One group hides while the other is "it". When the other team finds all the members, they win! And they hiding team gets to move around. the "it" teams loses when they cant find everybody.

Please Update! This is a great storie! Look how many people you have on your alerts! Favorites? You should have like, so many! A lot of people want you to update! We've been waiting a year! Come on!! Update! I know how it is to update a story you haven't in like, forever. You once again have to check what's going on, remember the plot, all that crap.

This is one of the best stories I've read ((Well, technically this is the second time I've read it :)) But you have the character IN-Character like all the time,and your grammer is awesome! You will not believe how many crappy stories I have read wehere people cannot write dialougue for their life! And, they can't spell either! HELLO? Spell-check?? HELLOO? You have a really great plot going on here.

Oh, BTW: Could you think you could respond to this review? I love it when people appreciate it when I... appreciate their work. :) And I just wanna make sure you got this. You're probably reading this in your e-mail right now. I love it when you see that topic, "Review Alert!" it makes me so happy! I hate flames though. You get all excited and the readers become all bitchy. Why continue to read the story if it's horrible, right? (Hey, I'm not saying I'm anywhere near being a good author, lol) So, please, could you update, and respond?

UPDATE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND SHOVEL CHEESE DOWN YOUR THROAT!! CHEDDAR CHEESE! I said it! Cheddar cheese! (Suddenly, you here an explosion coming form my pocket) what the hell...? (It was some colgate toothpaste. I pick it up and stare at it) WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT DOING IN MY POCKET?! Aww man, I love these pants...

So please, respond and update!

Au Revoir! (I have a french quiz tomorrow!!)
Sara-Chan
kuwafabulous
2006-08-19
ch 8, anon.
abusehey... nuff of the kuwabashing
Incendire
2006-02-07
ch 16, anon.
abuseoh wow, this is amazing, update soon please, can't wait to find out what happens
MysteriousNekoHanyou
2005-11-13
ch 16,
abusePlease write more!
Ruler of Randomness
2005-09-20
ch 16,
abuseWrite more!! You can't just leave it there! It's a cliffhanger and everything! ...love it so far, though! ^_^
Natsumi Salias
2005-09-08
ch 16,
abuselol update
Betabonanza
2005-08-26
ch 16,
abuseupdate soon cuz i love it
DigiTails
2005-07-06
ch 16,
abuse*snickers* oh that was amusing and poor Kurama's house is being destroyed...you must update soon
Gin Shinwa
2005-07-06
ch 14, anon.
abuseXD oh boy, poor Hiei-san I doubt that's what he wanted to see
Gin Shinwa
2005-07-06
ch 13, anon.
abuseThat is an amusing game
Gin Shinwa
2005-07-06
ch 12, anon.
abuseDOGGIES! Doggies are very good second best pet next to cats...
Gin Shinwa
2005-07-06
ch 11, anon.
abusePoor Hiei-sama...he would probably rather be killed slowly and painfully than ever ever wear PINK!

oh...katana...*eyes gleam evilly*
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