That was a good end to the story, but how would Gingivere and Lady Sandingomm know about ducking and weaving, I thought that was a hair tradition. Once more I still think that you could've done a bit better on the way that the three dibbuns spoke. Well done all in all, it was very good story.

The Littlest Dibbun

Attack of the super Dibbuns!

Bone shattering crunch? A dibbun do that? Not realisitcally...

They want to rebuild Kotir... but then they would have to tear down a wall of the Abbey. Why do that when the Abbey is already ready and waiting to be captured (well, not exactly, but you get my drift)?

Bella had been badly wounded...I'd hate to see what state all the vermin are in now...heeheehee.

Wait a second...shrews use arrows?

Ah... now that I actually READ your story I can see you aren't doing that. Sorry. BUT I STILL THINK ITS A RIPOFF!

Hmmmm- IS there a character called Gashleg? I know of an Ashleg but no Gashleg. YOU BETTER NOT BE TALKING ABOUT ASHLEG YOU BOOBLE BAT HOOGEN- HE IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER OF ALL TIME!

well good story wait stop lieing it SUCKED sorry bout that just cant lie not good a for a dhaps performce

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Wow! I didn't Dibbuns were that strong. Anyway that was really good.

Great Story

Like I said before last timew. This was very well written.

Snotfoot? Bloodguts? Cool. By the way, what happened to the original Gonff during all this?

I loooooooooveeeeeeee redwall! the series is awesome! so was this series but one little tiny problem its Log-a-Log not Log a Log. im only so picky because him and the original Gonff are my favorite characters in the whole series! other than that great!(im hyper!)