it was awsome i really enjoyed it u should write more stories

0 hilarious, how you can turn an innocent yogurt into something...not :P

*sniggers* lovely.

lol this was wonderful!

Oh la la it is..So good.. but you forgot about the whipped cream..

Aw! This was really cute! Very different from your angst stories, but it's VERY good! Great Job!

aww, that was really sweet and really funny! bah! its great!

Apology accepted!

Love your describtion of Duo, so what is he now, God of Death, Master of Seduction. It's easy to imagine!

Aww! I'm glad he said sorry! It made it all better! And it means they get to make up! *hentai grin*

It's very cute, very nice, especially for your first attempet at a oneshot, you did it really well, good job! I'd love to see more!

Keep wiriting!

Hugs,

Sunny Dragoness

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[snicker] Yogurt... cute! It's a cute idea.. I really liked the few lines from "I'm sorry.." There was a nice episode of some real connection there that you'd built up to. And Duo's use of the word selfish as well. That's a neat one too. Good job!

It was cute!

Great. I won't be able to look at dannon without laughing either! *makes sure that's nopt what she's been eating for lunch* The majority is actually something else...but there IS two or three dannon in there. That's...wrong...great ficcy!

Hm, I'm not sure that I'll be ever to look at a container of Dannon la creme the same ever again, either. ;)

This was wonderful for your first one-shot, though you couldn't tell that this was your first attempt at a one-shot. It was well-written and captivating, and not completely plotless.

And yes, school does mess with our wonderful summer schedules. (Hence the reason I haven't updated Chpater Four of Breaking the Habit yet).

Anyway, Cheers to a lovely one-shot-Rasha

You did good. Very good in fact. I like the descriptions of everything as a whole. Very nicely done.

i think that anyone who read this story would look at Dannon la crème ever the same again :) its verry good .