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| Vulcan Rider 2008-05-19 ch 5,  | abuseoops. Hit the send key too soon. Don't see Ranger letting Steph go too long without getting some help of her own. I think you have handled his and Tank's awareness and reactions to the situation beautifully. Please finish this soon. It's difficult to be kept hanging on a story such as this, and you are a very talented writer. Mag |
| Jessica 2008-02-27 ch 5, anon. | abusePlease continue the story! |
| parisnight 2008-02-17 ch 5, | abusei like grandma bella after all although, i kinda want to see steph kick joe's butt, but its ok |
| wyominggal 2008-02-06 ch 5, anon. | abuseI just found your story. It is difficult to read, but I hope you will continue soon!! |
| EcstasySighs 2008-01-26 ch 5, | abuselove your writing style! obviously i cant say i "love" your plot - that would be wierd, yah? - but the way you're handling the storyline and stephs perspective is excellent. ps - nice touch with grandma bella! |
| Bowlingforshrimp 2008-01-17 ch 5, | abusethis seriously needs to be updated. |
| Stephanie 2007-12-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis s a great story, I am so serious. Are you going to continue this? |
| DoveKinkaid 2007-12-06 ch 5, | abuseOh Wow! I really can't wait to see how Bella keeps Joe inline and how Steph manages to cope. |
| She'sGotHighHopes 2007-11-20 ch 3, | abuseHey, I just wanted to get down on my knees and grovel to you for another update. This is a terrific story and I'd hate to see it go unfinished. I love your writing style and my heart is breaking for Steph. I'd like to see Joe get his for what he's done to her, and see Steph finally deal with what happened so she can try to get on with her life. I'm glad Grandma Bella understood her, and I'm curious to see how she plans to make Joe's life hell for his actions. I have a twisted desire to see Ranger and Steph and the Merry Men teach Joe a lesson he'll never forget. Please return to this story. I'll send Tastykakes to you through the mail if you do :). Jaime |
| flamencochic 2007-09-25 ch 5, | abuseThis is a wonderful story. You have told it with grace and compassion towards Steph without sugar coating it. As for where the story should go... Steph needs to rebuild her self esteem and she needs training. Ranger and his MM are just the ones to do that. Joe needs to deal with Grandma Bella and if that doesn't work Ranger and his MM should get their chance. I do not think he needs to die but he does need taught a lesson in how to treat a lady. |
| missy-mg 2007-09-01 ch 5, | abuseThis storyline is good...I hope you continue with it. |
| bitten-by-luv 2007-07-31 ch 5, | abuseaw... Thats so sad. Keep going. Youve got the charaters right on target. lol. |
| sherry 2007-07-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat job on this story. I love it.Is there going to anymore? Keep up the great writing. |
| 2cute 2007-07-20 ch 5, | abusewow! this is an amazing story,it is so well writen and i can see exactly what is happening. it almost made me cry, and it made me laugh. i REALLY would love to read on, you should defenetly keep going. |
| Kelley 2007-07-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is a great story - please continue !! |