wow, lol!

I loved the story!! AND OMG YOU KILLED CLOUD! twas a great ending.

I watched Advent children a couple of weeks ago and i must say that i much rather prefer this than the movie! all because it makes alot more sense!!

Well n e ways i am going to come back and review the other chapters!

You killed Cloud! ^_^ Well, at least he gets a happy ending here. I wonder how AC will end... *wishes Cloud the best of luck* =D Anyway, lovely story! I enjoyed reading it!

*sniffle* So sad... *goes read next chapter*

I like! ^_^ Though I wish you wouldn't have killed Yazoo, Loz, and Kadaj. ;_;

aw...no matter how much i dont really like the aeris/cloud pairing...this was awesome. That would be rather interesting if this was how AC turned out...:D

(sniff) That was beautiful! ^_^ I love your writing!

Congrats on finishing your story! I enjoyed it- liked the twist at the end!

Great story! Congrats, I love Cloris fanfics..too bad there aren't a lot of them.
Hope you'll write another one ;)

I enjoyed this story alot.Your a really good author.^-^

Yeah I know how it is with updating issues. The motherboard on my computer just had to crash so now I'm stuck using my sisters, and I can't use it that often... O_o
Anywho, great as always! ^_^

hey this is very good it's pretty much right on fun fun, write more what happen's now hum

Lol! Aeris killed them all! *giggle* Oh, you didn't get my email? Anyway, yup, Clorith from AC.net and I recognise you, Cloudsbaby!! =D Devotion and Aeris Fanclub! Nope, I'm not a Mod, I'm a site staff. So we basically can see everything but don't have to do the dirty work. *lmao*

Oh no, will Cloud be ok? I hope so! Write more fast!

Hurry up and write more! Now I say!

*sigh* Will she die? Will Cloud be sad? Will Cloud die? *sigh sigh* My poor little heart, I don't think it can take very much. ^_^ Anyway, good luck with the last 3 chapters!