This is good. What happens next?

great story

its a little 2 rushed and OOC

Sorry to hear that you are not cont this story. It was a very good AU story and if you change your mind, please cont it. Very good work btw and peace!

Thank you to those who've reviewed. And I just want everyone to know I'm not continuing the series.

Tim C. - Not to be rude, but I'm quite aware that Lucas isn't Nathan's son, and that both Carol & Robert are dead. This is/was an AU. It's as though Kristin married Nathan between season 1 & 2 and they adopted Lucas, after they had a daughter. If you happened to have read "Nathan, Kristin, Moira, and Finally Lucas" & "Goodbye to Lawrence" you would have seen that.

Good, but Lucas isn't Nathan's son and Nathan's (Bridger) wife died before they had more than one son, Robert, who died in the line of duty.

Very suspensful! I can't wait for the next one (if there isn't another one, could you please write it?)

Good so far. I just wish you'd make these a little longer...

Great so far, can't wait to read the rest.

I liked it, you didn't rush into the story and put plenty of details...Im gonna go read the story again.

I love this story so far! One thing: Is more coming soon? Please? Pretty please?

finish! finish! finish!

Well, I am enjoying this series but I do think the parts are a little too short. It gives the story kind of a choppy feeling to it.

First, it would be easier if you put the title first and then what part it is. Then they will line up in the list of stories.I find it hard that Bridger would have tears streaming down his face. I could see him breaking down over their dead bodies but not when they are just missing. I also find it hard to believe that Katie couldn't stop a timer without Lucas. It's not feasible for a boat to have things on it that cannot be taken care of most of the crew, not just a teenage civilian. If it was that easy to get into the boiler, why didn't Bridger go and do it earlier instead of all the crying?

The reintroduction of Zeller is an interesting choice of villains, but a good one. There seems to be an abrupt jump between the first and second parts. It interupts the flow a bit to go from the possibility of a problem to the revelation that Zeller is out of prison and likely on seaQuest. It is awfully hard to believe that after what had happened before and with Kristin's connection to him that seaQuest wouldn't have been notified right away. There are some grammatical/punctuation errors, particularly with the dialogue portions, as well as misspelled words that a good proofreader could catch. The idea of hiding them in a place to cover body heat is inventive on the author's part. I will be interested to see what happens next and hope there isn't the long gap between posts this time.