Whoa, very nice, very spooky, very Silent-Hill-esque. The language used is perfect. Nicely done.

Nicely done, I had almost overlooked this fic in general searches, but since you yelled at me on shslash, I decided to look you up. Nice flow, and it was a little odd about the ending, but I read it again, and decided that it fits well with the over all tone of hopelessness. Plus, you have James and Harry together...and that is always a bonus. Reminds me of another story on AFF with simlar themes, but it included all the cast from SH4.

Neat little story, and probably will be reading your others as well.

You know what's dumb? When you like a story and don't review it.

This is very well written. Very "Silent Hill," I think. I also like how you use the chapters. They just get shorter, and the end is abrupt like Harry and James' departure. Very creepy.

Nice anonymous. You're entitled to your opinion, of course, but way to go on actually telling me what I did wrong instead of just writing a sarcastic remark with a nice smiley.

Interesting story but you should really choose characters that you're familiar with to write about. You obviously know nothing about James Sunderland or even Harry Mason. Leave them be and write about stuff you do know. ;)

This was odd...yet strangely enjoyable. Your writing reads almost like poetry which is also enjoyable. Excellent job!

I am stunned speechless.

The description is beautiful, the premise is original, the ending is brilliant... everything, right down to the creative use of chapters, is perfect.

You are incredible, and I love you.

Holy... I... wow. This is seriously beautiful. I'm not kidding. Never did I ever think I'd see an honest-to-god Harry/James fic. Thank you so much for writing this. Please, please, please keep writing.

God, that was beautiful. I loved how the chapters grew progressively shorter, but still managed to have the same amount of impact. The phrasing is wonderful, and I adored the entire story. This one goes on my favourites.

OMG! I love, no wait... LOVE this story! please make a sequel. it's too jumbled-up and creepy and stuff to just end there. but either way great work!

Hmm...well, That was...interesting. ~_~Yesh, very interesting indeed. *chuckle* Me and my messed up self liked it, Kinneas-kun! I wonder if you will do more... *smacks self* this sounds odd, ne? *laugh* Well, anyways, just wanted to let'cha know that I liked it, personally! Yatta!

--Angst ~_~

Whoa. That was creepy, dude. I'm glad you had me read it. You're really good at this sort of thing. I loved the jumbled-ness of the second chapter, I think that was my favorite part. Nice work. :3

I really wish I knew what that was too, but as it was so different from your usual work--and still good--I give it four stars. Ah, four and a half because I really liked it. 4.9--like Wallrat. *shakes fist ala Jon Stewart*

Nice use of chapters.