Wow, i feel like i just finoshed an eight hundred page novel. Amazing job, I hope you continue to write pokemon fan fiction.

I used to love this fanfic years ago when you were still writing it and now I don't know what I saw in it. Despite your claims, spell check WAS invented back then, and your characters are Mary Sues.

Wow, it's been years since I've read this series, and finally the end has been written. Though I think Sereiko's personality change was a bit cheesy. Maybe flashbacking instead of just telling would be more effective.

I liked how the world was repeated and how Gary and Arti remeet, but I like even more how we never know if they really do get together (though I think they do), or if Sereiko and his wife (Madame no-name XD) ever meet again.

You really are a talented writer.

To those who actualy check back, AI14 is actually in progress x_x this is the second to last (or maybe the last depending on how ambitiously I can get the plot end out without trying ti rush it)
check IcePhoenix.com for the teaser intro ;;

Do I even have to tell you how good this is?
I think not.
Although it took me a week to read all three stories.
There all very good.
Continue soon Naoko!

"You're like the part of me I never knew existed until we met. Take this and keep it with you, I'll have the other half, if by chance something ever happens to either of us, I'll never be whole again... Half of me will be gone."

Aww.. that bit was touching ) I hear Articuno Island #13 is on its way? )

Hi.I have also got the name Arti Cuno,but that doesn't matter does it?I've just read ALL of your fanfics and ALL of them are the tops!

Also,I would like to congradugate you on your FanArt.They are soo beautiful but I wouldn't think of copying,because Im a artist too and I know how annoying that is.

Well please don't take any noticce whatsoever about those mean ******s who critise your work on Articuno Island because there a jeolous of you.

I know many people who hink I'm coping your char. name ,but I had that name in my mind since the first series of POKEMON came out,so please dont take offense!

Anyway,I would like to see you continue to work on your artwork,and fanfics and maybe even reopen Articuno Island.

I would also like to say that there are many people who admire you and your work such as myself.

Best Wishes

ARTI CUNO

You know, I really like this story a lot. I've been checking for like, a long time for you to write something. And then I saw you're message that you were blaming not writing on the fact that someone misunderstood you and thought you were writing about yourself. I just wanted to say that I was really dissapointed. On the fact that you haven't written and the fact that you blamed it on someone else. I don't know what's going on but, I DO know that its not fair to blame someone else. Now, I really like your stories and I think you are a *great* writer. But EVERYONE get's bad reviews. But doing this, it's NOT going to change that person's opinion at all or anyone elses. Anyway, I hope that if you do stop writing it will be because YOU want to stop and not because some people don't like your stories.

This is a really good story. I can't wait for the next part. PS. Please e-mail (I sent you an e-mail about this) me about articunoisland.com I keep trying my link to it ever twenty minutes or so hoping that you've got a new server.

**drool, drool** I love this fic! Ahh! Very cool! You have an excellent imagination! Keep writing!

Damn girl, ya nearly got me cryin on the last part of this fic. You gotta finish it *cries* I can't wait another month for the next part, I want it now! *cries* This is a great fic...you should continue it ASAP_

more fic. *drools*

Freaka

cool one Arti, hope the next one's cool too:-)

AWESOME! I never thought you flatter yourself! You are a great writer and that last scene was COOL! It'd be an awesome picture! I can't wait for the next part Arti!

Alright, let's get one thing straight here, I AIN'T the Arti Cuno in this fic, I only took on that name AFTER I started writing pokémon fanfiction. I ain't flattering myself be any means for those who think it. Is it now against the law to creat a character and use the name as your pen name? This is the kinda review that made me stop writing a few months back... I might as well stop altogether...