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RakeeshJ4
2007-12-17 . chapter 1
I'm not going to guess 'Uchiha Itachi', since clearly if you wanted us to be *sure* of our guess you'd have given more substantial hints. We're meant to think it might be Itachi, and that is possible: we have no idea what he was like four years before the Uchiha Massacre, which would be about right for the timing here, I think. Except that he'd be a bit strange for being such a prodigy and so highly advanced in the military for his age, and this Nameless Stranger certainly is a bit odd.

A pleasant glimpse at a dark, dreary childhood that nonetheless isn't TOTALLY dark and dreary.
Golden feathers Edward
2006-12-07 . chapter 1
You should make a sequal to this story! It's such a cute fic! Like let them meet years later before he Naruto becomes a ninja and wonders out of the village and meets a missing nin named Itachi and finds out it was the same person as the one that saved him that day! -squel- I would so love it if he took Naruto with him! . . . . . . . . . . -blush- could you make it yaoi if you make a sequal? Please?
dashdashhypenspace-
2006-09-23 . chapter 1
That was good. A part of Naruto's childhood? I think so.
TBPK
2006-06-03 . chapter 1
I think it's Itachi. Iruka has brown hair and tan skin, and in the summary Wowie-san decided to relate the character to Sasuke. But for all I know I could be completely wrong.

This story is awesome Wowie-san! I do hope you'll uncover the mystery man's identity though.
OnlyTimeWillTell
2006-05-15 . chapter 1
this makes me cry, when i think about how it was itachi that introduced him to ramen. and how itachi is evil. and, everytime i think of naruto eating ramen, i think of itachi... if naruto always eats ramen... do you think everytime he eats it... he thinks of itachi?

~heather
servant of the almighty Kyuubi
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
Itachi right? Pale, ponytail, emotionless, chunnin before hes in his teens, ...Its Itachi.
ivybluesummers
2005-08-14 . chapter 1
i'd like to think it's iruka but he's pale and all so i certainly am wrong. or not? ^_^ anyway, i do like the simplicity of it all; it hits the target, and the way you have started and ended your prose was really dramatic
Chobit 00
2004-08-29 . chapter 1
Uh, hold on...was that Neji? Sorry, I'm as dumb as a brick wall, but you did a very good job.
Sora_Ookami
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
^^ cool
hikariko
2004-08-21 . chapter 1
^_^...kawai!
Kaka-C
2004-08-20 . chapter 1
aw... how sweet ^_~ poor Naruto, I always wondered how he had survived alone by himself lolx
Irukapooka
2004-08-20 . chapter 1
Ah...so cute! I liked it! 'Tis good!
EmptySanity
2004-08-20 . chapter 1
ah. Nice and sweet with tad Naruto and Itachi-ness! That adds up and im happy.
Dark Fox
2004-08-20 . chapter 1
Beutiful I loved it.
Jen
2004-08-20 . chapter 1
aw
so sweet!!
O__o
Was that itachi? If it was then u dont have to make this a one shot... unless this ISNT a one shot ;_;
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