this is a great little story. i really enjoyed it.

I loved your story! You were so good with the characters copying their attitudes and speech exactly! ^^ I felt myself being pulled into the story and I really think that could happen to poor Feizhi.

Now I shall shut up, lol!

Ow! Poor Feizhi! I know how it is to get frustrated and are impatient!! Lol!! XD This was so good!! I started to laugh like crazy!

Feizhi kinda reminded me of myself in this story! =P Great done!

Wow

Excellently done! See, you DID come up with something there! It was logical and it taught a lesson. ^_^
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Hehehe...Master Feh's cooking. Very amusing.

Whoo! Great story, Joker. I had a feeling that food would come into it somewhere :P

Seriously. I've been gone three months, and this is the first story I've read in a while. I've always been amazed by your ability to transform an idea I wouldn't even consider into a coherent story... I'm frankly not disappointed. Keep writing.

Haha! Orginal AND funny! Well portrayed characters, interesting humour... ah, you write a good one-shot.

Eeh... Sorry my review is really late, but I blame the computer, it kept freezing as you may have guessed. >< Stupid Dell.

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I have to say, this story has it's ups and downs. I think the personality of her father was perfect, and the little part about him reading her diary was perfectly for an extra chuckle.

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I some-what think I shouldn't have read this considering how stupid I can act. ^^ I tried to "pass the test" when after my soccer practice there was a fly in my water bottle. I got a lot of weird looks...

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But who cares about that? I ramble too much... Any way, keep up the great stories! I can't wait to see Abstract! ;)

hee hee... good one-shot fic... kinda funny too... poor feizhi... oh well! :-P

Keep writing more fics! ;-)

"It watched as Feizhi lifted her leg up above the table, it watched as she hobbled on one leg, trying to gain her balance, and it watched as she fell over backwards."-- LMAO!! That line had me rollig around in my chair!

This was great, i liked it a lot.

But what's Master Feh doing reading her Diary!? XP

Wow...This was great! Haven't seen a Feizhi story in a long time, and this one really fits the bill. I have a feeling you'll win the contest. You really portrayed the characters well too, and the spelling is perfect. This is really nice. Good luck in the contest, although I doubt you'll need it.

Ah that was wonderful! You're so going to win the contest! lol. Twas really funny, gave a good lesson, and really loved the way your portrayed the cahrachters. i am very very impressed!

Well, since you reviewed my fanfic, I decided I'd review yours. :D

Your writing is phenomenal! I was impressed with the whole story, and I liked Feizhi's temper when she tried to kill the fly. (I remember Master Feh telling her that she could use whatever item she needed to help her kill the fly! xP I wonder why SHE didn't!) You should do more one-shots like this! Nice work!

That was funny. I haven't read a story with Feizhi (sp?) in it for a long time...