|Reviews for My Husband, Michael Corleone|
| TheFamouslyUnfamousAuthor 9/22/12 . chapter 1
| LS 7/31/10 . chapter 1
That was so awesome!
I'm glad someone finally did a story on Kay's point of view :D
| disabledXaccount 2/5/09 . chapter 1
that was awesome! i just published the godfather in kay's perspective if ur interesting in reading it. that was awesome
| began-to-climb 1/2/07 . chapter 1
Damn...that was very good. Solemn, but a fleeting look into Kay's perspective as someone not born into the family yet a suddenly very important member.
| allfallsdown 3/24/06 . chapter 1
Nice job, you should be proud of this work. A great writing based on Kay's POV. Also, I thought it was original because it was not only about Kay's uneasiness, but what her thoughts on the future was. "Will anyone have the stomach to tell me that my husband, Michael Corleone, was a good man?" Excellent ending, implies whether the only way Michael could be called a good man is with money.
| Rain in the Morning 2/15/06 . chapter 1
Hey, nicely done! I love these movies, so I was so glad that you didn't butcher the characters. Everybody was nicely believeable. It's too bad we don't see more fics from Kay's POV. I liked how you set it during the Don's funeral - an emotionally-charged scene with political undersurrents. Perfect for Kay's introspection.
| L.E. Burnell 12/21/05 . chapter 1
Nice diction. The curtness works well for the tone. You really created a picture. Cheers.
| rockergurl13 11/21/05 . chapter 1
wow. i loved The Godfather, and this really gave an insight to the mind of Kay. i liked this!
| Mellygwen 6/27/05 . chapter 1
A very good take on the mind of a mobster's wife. Well done.
| Drac39 6/9/05 . chapter 1
Brilliantly done,Kay was all ways a character you felt sorry for
| Caporegime 1/31/05 . chapter 1
Wonderful, it captured a perspective not usually caught when dealing with the Mafia. I loved it, wish it would have been longer. But after seeing the movies many times it's cool to see things from Kay's point of view, Very Good.
| Jaelle17 12/1/04 . chapter 1
Very, very good. VERY good. Excellent. Perfect.
| liatc77 11/28/04 . chapter 1
thats a great fanfic and the Kay's POV of is really intresting. you should write more about the GF series :)
| Kia Vail-Kagami 9/4/04 . chapter 1
So... I never got to see the first of the 'Godfather' movies (manage to miss it every time) but I read the book it's based on, and I think you did a very good work of capturing Kay's thoughts.
| Leene 8/22/04 . chapter 1
Hi! Please dont leave HP Passion of Love and Hate!
Its my favorite fanfic ever!