 sugar-sparrow 2007-04-27 . chapter 7Hey Toki, I'm finally reading it. ^-^
I really like the plot. And it seems you've got the whole story all planned out. I just hope it turns out the way I hope it would.(Harry*ahem**ahem*and*ahem*Rose*ahem**ahem*makes a cute pair XP)
I'd also like to commend you for your writing. You really are improving. XP Keep writing! and check my story sometimes. XD
See you around! |
 Meya-Slytherin 2006-11-25 . chapter 7Hey, I love this fic... You should continue it!:D |
 chaste_Aeon 2006-03-26 . chapter 6 I like the plot, really. But I'm a bit of a stickler... Watch your grammar. *thinks* This was done during the year 2004, right? Lol. If you don't mind, and if you'll still continue doing this story, I'd like to offer to proof-read it. *grins* |
 Emma Barrows 2004-10-07 . chapter 6OK you have to update this soon!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
I'm so anxious to see!
Emma :) |
 Emma Barrows 2004-10-07 . chapter 5Hey
OMG this is awesome!! I have to read more!!
Please also feel free to check out my fics REVELATION and REVELATION II-LYCANTOR
LMK i'd love to know your opinion!
Emma |
 DarkNothingness 2004-09-20 . chapter 5your story rox!you realy expressed Rose's character well and I also like how you used the name Rose as in continuing the flower names it's a great idea. Write more please it's storys like these that make you respect even the most dislikable of characters and besides i'm dying to read the next chapter, is Draco gonna end up with Pansy or Rose? please Update |
 micmac371 2004-08-26 . chapter 5This is a pretty cool idea, but you should really edit a little better and stick to one tense. I noticed that you switched back and forth between present tense and past tense quite a bit, and it makes it a bit hard to read. Anywho, please update, I'm interested to see where this is going. |
 Fair as Sebastian 2004-08-25 . chapter 4This is a very intersting plot- would like to see more of it in the future. Keep up the good work!
*Wobble |
 Emma Barrows 2004-08-25 . chapter 4Please continue this!! i have to know what happens next! :D
Please email me when you've updated!
Emma |
 Emma Barrows 2004-08-25 . chapter 3Wow...this just keeps getting better and better! i have to read more!
:D
Emma |
 Emma Barrows 2004-08-25 . chapter 2WOW...this is really great. i love it so far!
Emma |
 Emma Barrows 2004-08-25 . chapter 1OMG this is soo great!! I have to read more!
:D
Please also feel free to check out my Hp fic REVELATION! I'd love to know what you think!
Emma |
 White Roses Among the Sea 2004-08-25 . chapter 4hi, i lyked ur story, could ya puhleeze make the chapters longer? |
 draco and me 14142 2004-08-25 . chapter 4LOL! he got a hankerchief to wipe off the kiss! priceless! PLEASE UPDATE! Can't wait to see whats in store for the twins! |
 draco and me 14142 2004-08-25 . chapter 3Oo0o0o, he likes Rose! That has to be it! and she doesn't like him? is he crazii? lol You rock! keep on writing! |