I quite enjoyed this story. The end where Bruce was telling Clarks statue about marrying Lois was very touching. Good job :)

excellent story. please continue it

Interesting little idea, really.

If nothing else, most of the points make sense, particularly the fact that Hal Jordan never became Parallax here; as you said, without Superman back to show it could happen, he probably wouldn't have bothered to go to such extreme lengths to get it back.

Just one problem; you had FOUR Supermen active here. Last time I checked, the Eradicator Superman was only active because he was using Superman's powers as a kind of battery which eventually resurrected him, so if he didn't come back here surely the Eradicator Superman shouldn't have been active?

Very nicely written.

Very nice. I liked the premise and your telling flowed beautifully..

keep penning,

Marns

Beautiful man. It almost makes me wish that this was how DC should have handle it.

ANOTHER GREAT STORY FROM A BETTER THEN GOOD WRITER.

One word...amazing...I don't cry much at stories and such, but I did at this one. Keep it up. Send this to DC, maybe they'll publish it(the worst thing they could do is say "No.").

I liked going you handled everything perfectly.

This was excellent. Good all around job. This would make a really great Elseworlds read. Again, good job.

A great story.. Kinda sad though.. The idea of a world without Superman.. Just isn't right.

This is a very well written story, with real life events happeneing taht probably would have happened if Supes had really died. Although saddly the world would have ended during the Emperor Joker debacle, because Batmn would have gone totally insane. Great writting. I hope you write more stories

Sad but a true elseworlds...My thanks great story.

Another awesome piece. The conclusion was heart wrenching. Bravo!

Good story. I'm glad that you chose to make/keep Hal Jordan a true hero. I thought that your character twists were all well thought out.