 Nica 2006-07-29 . chapter 1 aww.. OMG what a cute story. I just LOVE it, =o) |
 bookworm26 2005-03-05 . chapter 1Oh, I loved that! That was so cute and very well written!! Kudo's to you! |
 Miss American Pie 2004-12-14 . chapter 1awesome fic. i love fresley. hey, if u have any free time do u think u could check out my fresley fic, with all of this? i mean if u want to, u don't have to. anyway, great fic. |
 favoriteword 2004-09-11 . chapter 1 Cute little story. It needed more description, less of basic action an dialouge. I liked how it was short and simple, though. Good job. |
 nutty99 2004-09-09 . chapter 1wow. this is sweet. But how come everyone reviews ur work and i only get a couple of reviews it's not fair.
People Pleaze review me i luv the feedback and big numbers for my reviews it makes my friends jealous.
But gr8 Fred/Wes story my mum looked at me funni wen i lol at the car door thing. |
 Silverwind24 2004-08-28 . chapter 1cute, really cute. wes and fred forever! |
 Mia Shade 2004-08-24 . chapter 1wow! this was so sweet and fluffy--just what i needed today. I really loved this ficlet, and I will definitely be looking forward to your next story. I'll be keeping an eye out for it!
Yasashii Tsubasa |
 Little Illy 2004-08-21 . chapter 1Hee hee hee! Beautiful sweetness wrapped in a sticky bun! This was so sweet = ) Great details, Fred's eyes being drawn to the roses (which ties nicely with the end) was a sweet touch. I love that she gets out of the car twice, just so he can be a gentleman. I'd like to offer criticism, but all I can think is that it was perhaps too short and lacking in real substance... but then, it’s fluff, it's not supposed to have substance is it? *giggle* The best bits were- "consider my feet swept." and when she smiled, "He hoped that it was because she had had a good time and not because he was leaving." Perfect last line. I can’t pinpoint why, but this had the perfect slightly British awkwardness that is Wesley all over. So that was well done. Lovely all over. Yay for sweetness. |
 willofthering 2004-08-21 . chapter 1Very sweet. I miss Wesley and Fred! |
 WhiteRabbit 2004-08-21 . chapter 1 Adorable. Great job. |
 Lily DeSilva 2004-08-21 . chapter 1Great job! I love Wes/Fred stories and you really wrote a great one. I love it! |