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Reviews for: Charming Chivalry
Nica
2006-07-29 . chapter 1
aww.. OMG what a cute story. I just LOVE it, =o)
bookworm26
2005-03-05 . chapter 1
Oh, I loved that! That was so cute and very well written!! Kudo's to you!
Miss American Pie
2004-12-14 . chapter 1
awesome fic. i love fresley. hey, if u have any free time do u think u could check out my fresley fic, with all of this? i mean if u want to, u don't have to. anyway, great fic.
favoriteword
2004-09-11 . chapter 1
Cute little story. It needed more description, less of basic action an dialouge. I liked how it was short and simple, though. Good job.
nutty99
2004-09-09 . chapter 1
wow. this is sweet. But how come everyone reviews ur work and i only get a couple of reviews it's not fair.

People Pleaze review me i luv the feedback and big numbers for my reviews it makes my friends jealous.

But gr8 Fred/Wes story my mum looked at me funni wen i lol at the car door thing.
Silverwind24
2004-08-28 . chapter 1
cute, really cute. wes and fred forever!
Mia Shade
2004-08-24 . chapter 1
wow! this was so sweet and fluffy--just what i needed today. I really loved this ficlet, and I will definitely be looking forward to your next story. I'll be keeping an eye out for it!

Yasashii Tsubasa
Little Illy
2004-08-21 . chapter 1
Hee hee hee! Beautiful sweetness wrapped in a sticky bun! This was so sweet = ) Great details, Fred's eyes being drawn to the roses (which ties nicely with the end) was a sweet touch. I love that she gets out of the car twice, just so he can be a gentleman. I'd like to offer criticism, but all I can think is that it was perhaps too short and lacking in real substance... but then, it’s fluff, it's not supposed to have substance is it? *giggle* The best bits were- "consider my feet swept." and when she smiled, "He hoped that it was because she had had a good time and not because he was leaving." Perfect last line. I can’t pinpoint why, but this had the perfect slightly British awkwardness that is Wesley all over. So that was well done. Lovely all over. Yay for sweetness.
willofthering
2004-08-21 . chapter 1
Very sweet. I miss Wesley and Fred!
WhiteRabbit
2004-08-21 . chapter 1
Adorable. Great job.
Lily DeSilva
2004-08-21 . chapter 1
Great job! I love Wes/Fred stories and you really wrote a great one. I love it!
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