Aw, how could you abandon this story! I just stumbled upon it, and it has such great potential!

Please reconsider continuing it!

This is so strange, and all the more intriguing because of it. You write Harry's voice very well from the stance of this context (which is to say that the light you have chosen to show his character in is a good one and that you write him in such a light very well), and the surrounding characters don't feel neglected for it. The plot is definitely a very interesting one, both new to me and a mystery. I know this has been sacrificed to your other story, but perhaps with that one complete it could be time to return to this one? Probably wishful thinking, but it's worth a shot, I would definitely like to read more if it were to ever exist.

Aftermath

The Dursley's acting so 'nice'...that is just too bizzare! It's too bad you've said that this story is abandoned. You have a writing style that is enjoyable and a way with the HP characters that is insightful. I can only hope that you might change your mind and give this story another chance at greatness. Talent such as yours should not be wasted. Flex it, nuture it and watch it grow.

Well, I agree that the other story should take precedence, but this one has the potential to be a very good read as well, were you to pick it back up (HINT! HINT!).

OK, VERY creepy! Way worse than my version of 'nice' Aunt Petunia...

This is good, I know you won't be writing more...but it's very good.

Sad that you will not continue this fic - would be very interesting.

Dear E.M. Snape-

I know this story has been cancelled, but I felt obligated to tell you that you are simply a compelling writer- I, myself, was absolutely SEETHING in rage as I read the first few chapters. You make following along and identifying with the characters so easy- I'm amazed. Also, my thanks for 'In Blood Only'- I never thought a story with Snape as Harry's father could be so intriguing, nor that an author could figure out a way for that to make SENSE!

Thanks for all the time you've spent on your writing!

Sincerely, MarsOutcast

Oh, it's such a shame that this story won't be continued. You have an original and interesting concept here. And you write Snape like none other.

Chapter four was Snape's chapter, in my opinion. He was perfect in it.

And Harry is written just like I like him, angry, confused, but still /Harry/! You play with his mind exquisitely.

What more can I say? While I understand why you won't continue this story, I can say that I refuse to lose hope in a change of mind.

Hm...I'll have to read more before I can give a thorough judgment. I kind of like this Harry.

cool fic
update soon plz

Well, In Blood Only's done NOW, isn't it? So you no longer have any excuse not to continue this story. Honestly, as much as I enjoyed In Blood Only, this is a better story--much more unique. I can definitely say I've never seen a "Dursleys weirdly turn into nice people" story, but there are a lot of "Snape is Harry's dad" stories (although few, if any, as well written as yours, to be sure!). So...update! Or at least tell us what happens. But I'm sure we'd all rather prefer you just keep writing.

This is interesting, but does that mean you are not updating In Blood Only?

LMAFO!! They took happy pills!