Reviews for Nighttime Coming

Reviews For: Nighttime Coming

Kimusume Kaoru 2005-03-31 ch 1,	abusethat was so sad... really sad. it was bittersweet in some way.. but it was good. Please continue writing Phantom of the Opera stories.. this one came out good and i'm sure if you wrote more of those... they would be good too.
Hanyoukai 2004-11-24 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful! And please update SPUD soon!
LoneGunGirl88 2004-09-01 ch 1,	abuseAw. That's so touching. I liked it a lot, good job! And I like your ending too, I don't think it needs work.
The Real Christine Daae 2004-08-21 ch 1,	abuseThat was very good. Very well written, and always leaving you wondering how it will end. I like its simplicity and the way you describe their emotions. Its very simple and very true, therefore its an excellent read. Bravo.
Big sis ;o 2004-08-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseWould've, you know, logged in. But lazy. I love this! so proud My little sister is all grown up and writing so well! I love it I love it I love it. XD snugsnugs! You've really done well with the first person, and I love the italic parts, placed just right. Few words, but there's a lot of emotion packed in them. Wonderful, wonderful bit. Never watched Phantom of the Opera (read?) but I wubbed it anyway!
The Scorpion 2004-08-21 ch 1,	abuseOh, that was beautiful. Cliche, yes, but so beautiful! And you have quite a uniquely lovely writing style; I would adore to see more from you in the future. I normally don't like soft Eriks at all, but the way you wrote him here just captured my heart. Also, thank you for doing justice to the solidity of Christine's character. Keep up the good work!
Angelic Lawyer 2004-08-21 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was really good... Loved the wauy you had Christine narrating the story always in present time, it made things even darker and thrilling. Sad, of course, and moving. This was so realistic and well-written... I can't help but add it to my favorites!
abandonedineverysenseofthew... 2004-08-21 ch 1,	abuseWow... A tear-jerker... I love it! ^^ And I thought the ending was fine the way it was...
PhantomKnight 2004-08-21 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful. But really sad. Which dosen't take away from it. your a very good writer, keep it up.
pragmatically yours 2004-08-21 ch 1,	abuse"It's much easier to pretend that all is alright, when your eyes can't prove your lie." ain't that the truth? this one-shot made me all wistful and whatnot. and I started crying when he asked her to run away with him. said by the wrong person, it's just another corny line but in the context of this one-shot, it fits perfectly. excellent! I enjoyed it muchly. ^_^ p.s. wonderbread
Mel 2004-08-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhat?! Chrsitne went with Raoul instead of Erik. ANd Erik offered that he would take the baby and Christine. Gosh and leave Raoul alone. Man I would go with him then and there with the baby. Casue Erik knows that the baby is Raoul's, He doesn't care. I find that alot better. But never the less it was still good. JA NE NYa!!
Lavender Valentine 2004-08-20 ch 1,	abuseAh, Sandy...something different to read! I really enjoyed this. Hmm, you said you wanted me to like you more than Cassidy? Well, I can't be bribed with gratuitous smut, but updates work every time. I adore having something new to read... Lavender :>D
ladystrider77 2004-08-20 ch 1,	abusethat was absolutley beautiful..I just wanted you to know that, it was perfect.
wackoramaco87 2004-08-20 ch 1,	abuseWonderful one-shot. Sad ending. Darn it all, she could have run away...urm, but with all the other things, I guess not eh? tears The letter was sweet, and I'm hoping she takes him up on his promise... someday! =D
wackoramaco87 2004-08-20 ch 1,	abuseWonderful one-shot. Sad ending. Darn it all, she could have run away...urm, but with all the other things, I guess not eh? tears The letter was sweet, and I'm hoping she takes him up on his promise...=D

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