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| faith bonksie 2008-07-26 ch 24,  | abuseoh this is good!! Please update soon I cant wait for more! |
| Aussie Imp 2008-07-10 ch 24, | abusePLEASE FINISH THIS!I LOVE IT! PLEASE |
| BlackRoseDecending 2008-04-05 ch 24, | abuseI really like your story and I can't wait to read the rest of it! :P |
| dreamgirl93 2007-07-17 ch 24, | abuseway cool story! You must update soon! Physcho is gideon, right? Arghhgh! Why would they bring him back? Those elders! And Chris' whitelighter must be Joan of Arc, right? Makes sense... the sword... and Wyatt's tutor/whitelgihter? Michael? The archangeL? nice! Love this story! keep up the good work! |
| 1. STU-dumbDumB 2007-06-25 ch 24, | abusethis is so cool! :) ..but why is the pairing thingy chris/gideon? chris isn't really gay is he?? update soon! |
| MargotTenn 2007-05-02 ch 24, | abuseI have to say this story is SO MUCH FUN! I like how you have portrayed a teenage Chris - awkward, unsure of his place in things, and confused by all the mystery. Joan is fantastic - you handled the slow reveal of who she is/was really well and I think you got her probable personality down too. I like Michael (the archangel maybe?) - it's great that you slowly expose how truely powerful he is naturally through the plot of the story. Which is another great thing - you plotted out the story well - each chapter works well and the information events occur in the most exciting and interesting way possible. I hope you plan to continue. |
| neb92 2007-02-23 ch 24, | abuseDude. It just hit me. Michael as in Michael the arch-angel? One of the two named angels in the bible... You really like Christian themes don't you? Your my kind of Charmed fan. Can't wait for the update! |
| neb92 2007-02-23 ch 23, | abuseSaving her son from death had pretty much made Joan a saint in Piper’s eyes... But if she's Joan of Ark, she already is a Saint! Im confused... This is what I get for being protestant... Oh well lol. |
| neb92 2007-02-23 ch 12, | abuseWait, its Joan of Ark? Are you serious! That's kinda kool. But she was 19-ish when she died... |
| neb92 2007-02-23 ch 9, | abuseJust letting you know, I love this chapter's name. lol. |
| sailor cyanide 2007-01-18 ch 24, | abusegreat story i can hardly wait for an updaye, keep up the good work ps i think i finally figured out who joan and michael are- cool idea! |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2007-01-10 ch 24, | abusewoah, woah AWEOSME! UPDATE SOON! YOU SHOULD LET HIM KILL CHRIS ONE MORE TIME (but bring him back i love chris!) So then he could go for 3! ^^ UPDATE SOON! YOU ROCK! |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2007-01-10 ch 22, | abusehes so silly, but AWESOME! plan was smart-ish, but dumb in the saftey area, VERY dumb |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2007-01-09 ch 10, | abuseI LOVE IT! |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2007-01-09 ch 3, | abusepoor Chris |