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Icetor
2006-07-26 . chapter 19
Loved the story, but i'm a bit sad as it seems that you have stopped completely on this story, if you do ever start it up again i think you should seriously consider raven/draco just because harry is so sweet and innocent that i don't think he'd ever make a move or let on that he likes her, also, in respect to blaise, i think you should consider blaise/hermione they are a good match and i have often seen them well written.
Ophite68
2005-08-08 . chapter 19
I like this one, also the Bet. Another author to watch for when I'm surfing:>) always a happy thing
Shinigami Ace
2005-03-14 . chapter 19
Aww ^_^ glad i could help. Great chapter, i loved it! Poor Raven, she is a tangled mess of emotions isnt she? I love the way shes been portrayed in this chap, it's great!

Will there eventually be a confrontation between Harry and Draco? that would be cool. hehe.

The description of the 4 slytherins was great! Am I sensing a new set of Slytherin Marauders perhaps? I like the way you've involved the other second years, its great! It's sweet that they care for Raven. I love it!

Snapes letter to Ravens mum, how will her mother react? Maybe with a worried questioning? A catalyst to everything going on and Raven snaps? lol. I love trying to figure out what happens next, this story always keeps me interested!

I cant wait for more story! Its the best, i love it! Please please PLEASE write more sooN!!
Shinigami Ace
2005-03-02 . chapter 18
The strangling part had a great description!! Well done! Personal experience? damn, no wonder it was written so well. Sorry to hear about that.

Woo, i wonder how harry will react to draco! Will Raven tell anyone else about what really happened?

Will draco's dad find out? Perhaps some bad repurcusions? He did say not to hurt Raven...

Great chapter, i love this story, its going great! Cant wait for the next update!! Please please PLEASE write more soon!!
Candelabra
2005-02-26 . chapter 18
Ah . . . ur hint just confused me even more . . . BUT THAT'S OKAY!!
Oh, and I'm glad u like my new name! Yay.
And no, her saying 'oh goddess' instead of 'oh god' does not bother me in any way. Actually, I say 'oh gods' instead of 'oh god', so yeah . . . I was just wondering if it was a major plot point or something. Evidentally not!! And ur right, it does just seem sorta 'right' for her to say 'oh goddess'.
And, let me tell you, U ARE IN NO WAY MAKING IT OBVIOUS, WHATEVER THE LITTLE MYSTERY THING IS!! Unless I'm just REALLY dumb, and am the only person that can't figure it out.
OKAY, GOODBYE NOW, THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!
Shinigami Ace
2005-02-11 . chapter 17
NIce chapter! Poor raven, getting strangled. What are the other second years going to be doing?

SO her mums not telling her everything... ooh, is Raven really a pureblood? Something like that perhaps? explains why she got in slytherin.

No i have to wait! lol

I cant wait for more, whats harry going to do to draco, if anything? please please PLEASe write more soon!
Candelabra
2005-02-06 . chapter 17
Eb. . . darm u, UR NOT GIVING ME ANSWERS!
Evil, I tell u, EVIL! PURE EVIL!
Okay, UPDATE SOON PLEASE! PLEASE?
Oh, and why does she always say 'Oh goddess' instead of 'Oh god'? Or . . . is that just something I'm supposed to puzzle over?
PLEASE UPDATE! NOW!
Shinigami Ace
2005-02-05 . chapter 16
Wo! Raven and Jesse, lol. well done subtleness!(sp?)

Hmm... three parts to her slytherinness?? Curious... She dosnt know her past, was she adopted or something?? cos that would match, perhaps her real parents were slytherins... Or her parents hiding something from her, or perhaps som kind of prophesy?? very intriuging!

And my guesses are good?? That means i was right, right? YAY!! lol. so raven can read harrys mind and/or see what hes doing? coolie!

adventurous Raven, Go my sparking ideasness! Perhaps she dosnt have to get adventurous though, she could get so worried about harry that she tries to go help him or something?

An all round great chapter!! I love it! Hows raven going to react to Lupin, will she find out hes a werewolf before the end of school? and how will raven react when harry falls from his broom in quidditch? Please write more soon!

(glad to hear you enjoy my reviews so much! ;))

cant wait for more story!
Candelabra
2005-02-04 . chapter 16
Oh, yay, YOU UPDATED! NOW HURRY AND UPDATE AGAIN, QUICKLY! I LIKE IT! What's with the thing with Jesse, anyway? WHAT DOES HE KNOW? WHY DOES HE LOOK RELEIVED ABOUT SOMETHING?

OKAY, update soon, please!! PLEASE!
Shinigami Ace
2005-01-26 . chapter 15
Nice chapter! hmm... what wil happen to raven this year?? I rekon she uh... this connection, could she possibly see what harry was doing/read his thoughts?? Or maybe she'll follow harry into the whomping willow... hehe she can poke dracos hurt arm and make him yelp! Lol please write more soon!!
Shinigami Ace
2005-01-26 . chapter 14
Aww draco caught her... lol. Great chapter, why did raven faint? Does she have a *dark music comes on, lights dim* DARK PAST? *Lights back to normal* doo be doo!! Great chapter, you put up two in a row!! Time to go read the next one!!
Candelabra
2005-01-23 . chapter 15
Aww . . . she likes harry! But what about Blaise?
Anyway, I think she's gonna forge a connection with Harry (no, really? KINDA WHAT YOU ALREADY SAID WOULD HAPPEN!), become better friends with Malfoy, and . . . LEARN ABOUT SIRIUS BLACK AND WHAT REALLY HAPPENED!
Guesses! Just guesses!
Anyway, UPDATE SOON!
Candelabra
2005-01-16 . chapter 11
OOH! BLAISE! DEFINITELY!! . . . or maybe Malfoy. I'd say Harry, except I think that you're going to make him her twin or something . . . plus, he seems too much like a brother to ever like her in THAT way
Candelabra
2005-01-16 . chapter 7
Aren't they kinda young to be going on dates and stuff? I mean, she's eleven!
Oh, what the heck, I now people that have had boyfriends when they are eleven. Just thought I'd mention it . . . they were acting just a LITTLE bit older than I expected them to . . .
Shinigami Ace
2005-01-12 . chapter 13
Lol i like it!! I like the ending. Draco was a bastard. lol! I still rekon ginny was mean to reject raven like that! Anyway, great extras! Cant wait for the next year!
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