Wow, just... wow. When you have me feeling sorry for Peter Pettigrew of all people, you know you've accomplished something.

Your descriptions are lovely and I like how you added the little hiding place in the dormitories. It's completely plausible and it adds more to the story. I'm totally going to imagine it being there whenever I read Harry Potter from now on.

So, what I'm trying to say it great job! I loved this story. :)

I never thought of that happening, very good idea. You did a really good job with it too.

What I find striking is that Peter still treasures his memories from his school boy years despite the fact that he betrayed them all. I liked that little blast from the past with the secret stash. Peter at least made the right choice by going off with Hagrid. Remus definitely wouldn't have been glad to see him.

What I like is the way that you not only get in the characters' heads as humans, but as animals too. You did it here by writing how his mind was better as a rat, and you also did it in Azaleas by heightening Sirius-as-a-dog's smell.

You've done a really good job in giving Peter's perspective here. And it fits perfectly into the third book. Plus, it is extremely well-written. Really great job!

The only thing I don't like is this quote: There's a wolf inside. And what do you think it would take to bring it out? I just can't imagine Peter, who became an animagus for Remus, would think that. Then again that Peter would not have betrayed his best friends. anyway. The rest of the story is absolutely perfect.

Aww poor Peter :(

Wow - I love this story. I always wondered how Peter made it all the way down to Hagrid's hut without being eaten by a convenient owl. Great job!

My one suggestion is about Hagrid's accent - something about it isn't quite right... Ah, well - I've read very few fics with really good Hagrid accents, and yours is definitely one of the better ones. Just something to keep in mind though.

Nice job.

Excellent take on Peter here. Great job!

Oh, my. That was quite utterly spiffing.

I came across your stories on the Sugar Quill, and enjoyed them immensely, paticularly the way the one-shots all seem just like snapshots of a few minutes in the life of the various characters. If that makes sense.

Great idea. And I liked your grasp of Pettigrew's voice - it did really sound like him, the way he thought and acted. Perhaps...well I thought it was a little rough at the beginning, maybe a paragraph thing, and Peter transforming - how many times? I lost track of the action. Otherwise. no complaints. I enjoyed it.

An interesting take on something happening outside of Harry's purview, and a look into Peter's state of mind. I especially liked the detail of the hidden cubbyhole.

Wow. This is great. I love your insight into Peter. You really feel for him in this fic.

Thank you.

You are, without a doubt, my favourite fic writer. The insight you give to any or all of the characters you choose to write never fails to leave me floored. Voices is another beautifully constructed peice of work, you make the author see into Peter's mind and if not feel sorry for him, understand him...there really are no words for the way I fangirl your work.