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kiramyia
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abuseTHIS WAS A GREAT STORY. I DO LIKE YOUR STORIES.
Quill-32
2007-06-25
ch 5,
abuseAn interesting and thorough take on the cave-in plotline. I liked Sara's capability and Grissom's humor. Nicely done.
Mystical G Panther
2005-06-13
ch 5,
abuseyou should still do a sequel that'd be so cool!
a con. to the breakfast thing but make them get kidnapped! ah! that'd be so cool!
-mystical panther
Linda
2004-11-19
ch 5, anon.
abuseE...i'm squealing b/c she was great! I hope we'll get a sequel someday soon. :D please? w/ a cherry on top? haha. :D good job.
Beguile
2004-11-07
ch 5, anon.
abuseThere are no words to describe this. Wow. Amazing. Phenominal. Incredible. Abolsutely fabulous. Practically perfect in every way. Completely awesome. Stupendous. Astonishing. Extraordinary. Fantastic. Prodigous.
I loved every second.
syRen
2004-10-10
ch 5,
abuseWow! your storys are always awesome! hope you write many many more storys!
Grissom
2004-10-04
ch 5,
abuseWow, Jamie! Great job! On everything. The story, this chapter, the whole nine yards!
I loved the emotional stuff you added when they pull Gris out of the mine! Great stuff! Keep it up! I, of course, very much look forward to your next work!
~Gris
leddy
2004-09-30
ch 5,
abuseI sure hated to see this end. There's nothing quite like Grissom in need of some comforting. Loved the mix of tension and teasing at the hospital. Thanks for another great read.
Anolle
2004-09-29
ch 5,
abuseHow cute! OMG. I love it a lot, and I usually don't like a Grissom/Sara combo. Wonderful endings too. The whole thing is definatly my favorite!
Billy4Me
2004-09-28
ch 5,
abuseGreat job, of course! I've been anxiously awaiting this update, and the only disappointing thing about it is that it's over. :(

Absolutely loved the line about Grissom's blue eyes being the only thing needed to give the white hospital room color. And, much as I like RST, your ending was perfect. So, tell me, are you a full-blooded G/Ser yet? :)
Ming
2004-09-28
ch 5, anon.
abuseI can't believe it. This is the last chapter. What a great story and it's worth waiting and reading. You're amazing writer. Please continue writing because I love reading them. Thanks.
zeilfanaat
2004-09-28
ch 5,
abuseThanks for this magnificent story!! I really liked it. I hope to read more stories from you. (meaning: I hope I'll find some time in the near future to read your other two stories AND I hope you'll be writing another story soon).
(By the way, I'm not a G/S fan... only watched 8 episodes of CSI anyway, so I like your 'leaning-to-but-not-quite-there-strategy'. ;) )
OK, that's it for now. Keep up the good work!!
smrozier
2004-09-28
ch 5,
abusegreat story! :)
Lin
2004-09-28
ch 5, anon.
abuseAw it is SO sweet ! Really enjoyed this story, well done !

Regards
Lin
Melissa
2004-09-27
ch 5, anon.
abuseGreat story! I'm usually not a fan of the romances, but this was a really cool story. I've read all of your stories, and now, I think I'm addicted to Grissom hurt/comfort stories. Are there any others on the net? Please write another one soon!
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